Reviews for Property
xXxPhantomxXx chapter 22 . 2/12
Yes. Kiss him, love him... He's waiting for you, man! This is such a great story
xXxPhantomxXx chapter 15 . 2/12
What? Did Lvi sell them out?
xXxPhantomxXx chapter 13 . 2/12
Why would people be upset about Allen getting panic attacks? It fits the situation and what he's been through. I think it's perfect, so hopefully you weren't too worried.
xXxPhantomxXx chapter 12 . 2/12
This chapter was pretty nice, love that Kanda and Allen are finally bonding
xXxPhantomxXx chapter 6 . 2/10
This is so good... And I feel that you reflect Allen's character perfectly
hananotsuki hime chapter 22 . 10/5/2016
Seven years huh? They managed to stay under the radar that long? Awesome. They convicted Mikk? I'm shocked they even managed to do that, let alone for six years. Six years is only a drop in the bucket compared to how much time he deserves, but I'm amazed they managed to get that. I kind of like how it was wrapped up. This fic was too cute and the action was great! Thanks for sharing this! _
hananotsuki hime chapter 21 . 10/5/2016
Wow, they can't even convict the dude. He's connected to the CIA? Nice. I kinda thought it was Lulubell. I think this chapter was cute. It's sad that they can't really get any real closure with Mikk, but oh well. All cases can't be solved, can they?
hananotsuki hime chapter 20 . 10/5/2016
Wow, that was so much action, I read right through it without stopping, lol. That was too real. Great chapter!
hananotsuki hime chapter 19 . 10/5/2016
ROTFL! Allen is totally getting his jollies from talking to Tyki right now, hahahahahaha! This conversation is hilarious! I wonder what Tyki's goons secretly think about this conversation. I was wondering when Tyki was going to realize the kid had gained an ability to talk back to him and make a comment about it. Lavi is taking too damn long bruh. "Fear gave him backbone." I just love that line. Gotta wonder what happened from Allen's point of view.
hananotsuki hime chapter 18 . 10/5/2016
I love Tyki, but he's an ass in this fic rotfl. Kanda's a high school dropout? Didn't see that coming. Uh-oh...Tyki has arrived. Wow, he is so evil it's not even funny!
hananotsuki hime chapter 17 . 10/4/2016
I knew it! Backup was a pipe dream! I just knew it! I thought Lavi was dead on the slick...like for real rotfl. Allen just went on automatic mode right quick. Those are some pretty morbid images Allen is conjuring up there. OMG! KANDA! Welp...Allen sure is kidnapped now isn't he? Rescue mission time. Kanda's gonna have to come back later to save his boo thang.
hananotsuki hime chapter 16 . 10/4/2016
Lol...Allen is feeling some type of way right now huh? This scene is too real for me. The thickness of the emotions swirling around in that room is enough to slice through...like wind was a tangible thing that could be cut. Blackmailed into cracking the ring huh? Allen will feel some type of way about that. What I find funny is the fact that he doesn't even really work for them. I thought he at least worked for them. Surprise, surprise...lol. Not sure if backup is coming. The pace of the suspenseful scenes reminds me of a James Bond movie...the new ones with all the action, not the old ones that were more focused on the sexual relationships.
hananotsuki hime chapter 15 . 10/4/2016
I'm starting to feel some concern for Allen and Kanda. Tyki is not the best person to have caught on to someone's whereabouts. It's a scary notion. Wow Kanda, way to drop a bomb and leave it there to self-destruct on its own. No huh? Is she a plant or did she just find the secret hideout and party crashed? Too real man.
hananotsuki hime chapter 14 . 10/4/2016
Pffft...apparently Allen played him like a drum. Lavi should have known why Kanda didn't answer his phone, lol. He couldn't very well pick up while he was on the downstroke. Looks like the plot is picking up momentum. It's about to get real.
hananotsuki hime chapter 13 . 10/3/2016
Your imagery is wonderful and I really do love your word choices in this story as well. You are such a great writer, I really can't say this enough. I love this story! I'm kind of confused as to whether this is a dream or not, but I will figure it out in a minute as I continue to read. Tyki has a strange fixation with red doesn't he? Ah, it was a dream...I'd hate to have one like that...and so vivid too. This is probably where most of Allen's understanding of the mind of a sadist comes from. Wow...Kanda is going to have his hands full with this one. Hahaha, Kanda feels that there is a disturbance in the force. I would assume, if the mystery person has blonde hair, that it's probably Lulubell with news for Tyki about Allen. That is my assumption anyway. And btw, though it sounds weird, I like Allen's panic attacks. Not that I like them in general, they're horrid. But the way they are written in this story makes the fear more palpable for me to feel the effects of it along with Allen. It endears his character to me more as I feel more connected to him through his emotional turmoil. Great job! _
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