|Reviews for Ah! My Goddess!: Haloes|
| Charles Cook chapter 42 . 2/18
I found this story quit good. I am looking forward to the rest of the story. Thank You.
| RandomReview chapter 42 . 2/5
I've enjoyed reading your various stories and this is no exception, but I'm confused. Nephew? You talking about Gersemi (who I always thought of as a girl)? Then again I started reading your story a couple years ago so yeah may have to re-read to get up to snuff.
My only complaint so far has been the jumps from flashbacks to present time. It wouldn't be so bad if it only happened once or twice, but right now it's everywhere. The numerous jumps of perspective make this story a bit difficult to read in my opinion. Other than that...all good.
| TrueRedDragonGodEmperor chapter 42 . 1/4
Its sad that Keiichi has become such a horrible person. He has become nothing but a murder. He says that he didn't kill the Balancers for revenge but that isn't true. Revenge will not help. He previously said it would help but it appears to have made the situation worse. In a way. He doesn't deserve a goddess. Any goodness that he once had has died. It is sad that his daughter was murdered but the actions he is taking are not good.
| Brocky chapter 42 . 1/2
Heck of a twist with ameko. Did not see that coming.
love the pace of the story now.
| Grundini chapter 11 . 12/30/2013
Talk about freaky... put my comp's playlist on random and the one song that starts as I reach this chapter... Bonny Portmore by Loreena McKennitt.
| Ernest.Shippinglane89 chapter 42 . 12/29/2013
Great Chapter.. Mischa's interrupted nasty flashback was a 10/10 moment.
| Bree R chapter 42 . 12/29/2013
Honestly would have preferred less world shattering stuff, and just the relationship story this was at the start. Don't get me wrong writing is extremely solid. Just feels a bit too dark.
| Seth chapter 42 . 12/29/2013
Mother of God... YOU UPDATED! Holy crap, I was just checking your account on a whim! Pumped to the max!
| SakuraAyanami chapter 42 . 12/29/2013
hahaha I almost scream the moment I realize that Ameko is Sif sister. Everything is falling into place and the end is near
Btw merry christmas, happy holidays and a happy new year!
| Bunta-san chapter 42 . 12/29/2013
Just when I think I know all the plot twists, another one blindsides me that was there the whole time. Bravo, one of the best stories I have ever read and just maybe better than the source material.
| Quathis chapter 42 . 12/29/2013
Well, you know things are bad when Belldandy's good cop borders on bad cop. And Ameko as Sif's sister? Freaky, and fitting given the circumstances. Until next time.
| Gamera68 chapter 42 . 12/29/2013
Pretty good chapter. Glad to see Belldandy be a bad*** for once ;)
| BrazeRancor chapter 42 . 12/29/2013
I generally catch he big things, like Ameko's relation to Sif, but miss the little things like how she was able tongi with Keiichi without the System Force chucking a tantrum. Great chapter; as expected.
| Guest chapter 42 . 12/29/2013
This continues to be one of the best pieces of fanfiction I've ever read. I liked the way you balanced the present and the past in this chapter. It can be a difficult thing to write and you pulled it off. Keep writing and have a happy new year.
| Gamr541 chapter 41 . 12/13/2013
amazing plz keep this going i've waited for urdxkeiichi fanfic for a while now and yours is not only plausible but also ties in with the original story. its nice that you based your fic on the foundation tht amg/ omg is based on. ps is lind gonna make an apperance im only on chap 27 so if she pops in latr just ignore the ?