|Reviews for Connected|
| paper.creations chapter 1 . 7/29/2009
-sighs- Amazing. Very, very wonderful. I loved how you narrated it, with Edward's run on explaniations and stilted sentences. It made my heart leap in a fantastic way.
I hope you win! I haven't read any of the other entries, and I probably won't, but this was fantastic, and I'm sure you'll place because it was amazing. Very, very wonderful.
I loved it. Good luck.
| LoriRae chapter 1 . 7/29/2009
this was so sweet. i loved how you wrote this. check out my new story called "picture me sexy"
thanks for all your inspiration.
| SydneyAlice chapter 1 . 7/29/2009
That was fantastic! Good luck in the contest!
| Eliph95 chapter 1 . 7/29/2009
aw this was a really really sweet story!:)
| isabellsah cullen chapter 1 . 7/29/2009
That was beautiful! Very Edward Bella twisted romance! Loved every second of it! Thanks for sharing it. There were only a couple grammatical errors, and hardly any spelling mistakes. Very enjoyable to read.
| Twilightobsessed09 chapter 1 . 7/29/2009
Now that was a great fuckin' reconnection! This was awesome to read. How theylonged for each other was just heartwrenching and romantic all in one. Good skills!
| Littlemizzyx chapter 1 . 7/29/2009
I love this, it's definitely going in my Favourites.
I loved the little flashbacks in between moments, it really gave you a deeper insight into their lives and emotions.
Hope you win !