Reviews for Forever and Ever
Terms2k1 chapter 1 . 3/10/2010
Probably shoulda made Karin sound a bit more well shy blushing and more like sakura in the original before sasuke left
fuckthediseasebaby.x chapter 1 . 7/31/2009
You left me wanting more, damn

This is a beautiful fic, it really makes you think; and it's written well.

I think the description is great, I love how you put

"dark haired boy" it really brought out a good picture I could so easily see Sasuke

The writing is excellent, your grammar is fine.

The only thing that needs work is your CONFIDENCE woman!

Really, I enjoyed reading this fic, it was beautiful

It you need any tips and such I'm here for you, just keep on writing. Practice makes perfect - and if you stop writing it will lead you no where
NAwsomeness13 chapter 1 . 7/29/2009
Wow that was good it was short sweet and to the point good job!