Reviews for Duty
Elicullen26 chapter 1 . 10/24/2010

How can an one shot make so involved? That's a testimony of your tallent bb.

While I wait for an M&A update I was rumaging through your profile and found this, is so amazing and the epitome of unrequited love, so sad and yet I can't help but wonder how'd be if you decided to explore it further...

See you soon!
CarlisleAliceJazzCullen chapter 1 . 10/22/2010
Oh! *sob* poor guys!
Miss Blush chapter 1 . 10/5/2010
Loved it, and hated it at the same time. Simply heartbreaking. Thank you for a lovely story.
sasharose11 chapter 1 . 9/22/2010
Beautiful and heartbreaking. More, please, with an HEA. I like someone's suggestion of Bella dying in childbirth.
Lisa-FanFicCrazy chapter 1 . 9/17/2010
Sweet, but heartbreaking! SOB
The.Dragonfly.Lover chapter 1 . 9/13/2010
This is heartbreaking…at least they have something of each other to hold onto in the future. Beautiful story!
TrulyShadowKissed chapter 1 . 9/9/2010
I have tears rolling down my face. I love myself a well written angst as much as the next gal, but I can't say I didn't hope against hopes for a happily ever after. This story was wonderful and I hope to continue reading your stories.
Madmum chapter 1 . 8/29/2010
Pls continue this! How heartbreaking, so beautifully written. Thx :)
MinaRivera chapter 1 . 8/9/2010
OMG! Such a beautiful story! You wouldn't consider making it into a multi chapter story? Please? Petty Please?

Again, great job. I felt Jasper's and Edward's pain. And their love... no HEA... so sad... *sobs*
pepolas chapter 1 . 8/8/2010
loved it!
penguins5582 chapter 1 . 7/13/2010
Heidi34 chapter 1 . 5/22/2010
I finally had enough guts to read this. I'm too much of a wimp for angst but this story was worth the gut wrenching pain you put me through. I kept hoping or a HEA but ended up sobbing in the end. Loved it anyway. Thanks
kirifox chapter 1 . 3/23/2010
I adored this story, but was also heartbroken at the end. The intensity had me sobbing by the time I finished reading. I knew what was coming, but that didn't make it any easier when it arrived. My wish is for an Epilogue that has Bella dying in childbirth with twins, who both live and are healthy, so Edward has fulfilled his obligations and assured his succession in the monarchy, and can now live his life with Jasper, whether out or not, so they both have an HEA. Hey, that's the way it plays out in my mind! (OK, so Bella didn't get an HEA, but I don't like her much anyway!)
slowpoke15hi5 chapter 1 . 2/14/2010
OMG! I'm crying. I have never cried while reading ff before. Wow. that was so beautiful. I only wish they could be together. Maybe you could write a second chapter in which Bella confesses she is into girls and likes alice. then edward and jasper could be together and all edward and bella would have to do is make cute little babies and look happy in public. but then again, that would still be sad cause they couldn't be who they really are... tear. but wow. thanks so much for writing that :)
Twilighterheart xxxx chapter 1 . 1/16/2010
awe that was so sweet, i was on the verge of tears at the end :) brilliant job :)

Twilighterheart x
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