This is a great story. I'm glad that everyone found their happy ending.

Awwww, an Alphros story where he's not a toddler! Very sweet, and great wrap up for Tilleoth as well.

Wow, very very well done! I love that you even tied Eomer and Elfwine back into the line of kings. Great story, and I'm definitely glad I read it!

BTW, my last review was written right underneath the author's note for chapter 1, urging readers to submit reviews and not just favorite and/or follow, so my first sentence was replying to that as if you'd remember the note you'd written years ago... I blame a couple of very long days and lack of sleep. lol

I've been one of the discourteous readers who's completely enjoyed everything that you've written but hasn't left reviews. My apologies for that! The Elfwine chronicles are darling, and had me grinning many, many times. I'll go back and write on a favorite or two, as I should have done before.

I hadn't read this story yet because I tend to shy from AU, but this one is really working for me so far! The story is AU but the characters are still true to who they are in the books, and I appreciate that. I'm looking forward to what happens next!

A good read. Not bad. A little over simplified at times and sometimes the chain of logic was a bit unrealistic and ideal. But not a bad read never the less.

I love this story...incredibly well-written...

I love the story of Dol Amroth gaining and losing a daughter :)

Cool start ;)

Great little thing... But it did feel a bit rushed.
Still very good.

The what if of Theodred surviving has played on my mind for some time! Thank you for writing it, it was very well done!

The paradox thingy was heartwarming :)
Borys

A tough of the bittersweet to this story, with the damage done to Theodred. But this AU gave him a score or more years of relatively happy life.
One thing which bugged me about the early chapters is Theodred going to Minas Tirith. He was needed there like like a loud fart at formal party. IMO he should have stayed in the Mark and supervised its defence with whatever forces were let.

Borys

Loved the ending. It was appropriate both Theodred and Eomer got to be heirs.

A simply lovely story! Your "what if Theodred lived" scenario is a delightful story - I especially enjoyed how you had Eomer/Eowyn/Theodred interactions. :)

very interesting take, but it's gonna be heart breaking to see everyone wanna pair lothiriel with theodred :( ah well, hopefully true love prevails, lol ;)

i really enjoy your little eowyn-faramir interactions (probably because i forever will be in love with the man), and not just in this story but in others as well (i was a bit peeved reading "spoils of war" when eowyn and faramir had their honeymoon and stuff and i never got to read what happened, haha) and it'd be wonderful if you'd ever consider writing a story about them.

anyway, great writing as always, and it's so cool that you have all these pretty fleshed out smaller characters from the book, and not just focuses on eomer (and in this case theodred). really nice.