|Reviews for Second Chances|
| A Girl Named James chapter 35 . 7/8/2011
I loved it!
| A Girl Named James chapter 30 . 7/8/2011
This chap was really great!
Just a little fact, cuz I'm Catholic, but it was decided in a recent Vatican Council that it is no longer acceptable for commoners to use the name Yhwh as it is too holy and precious to just throw around. Songs containing that name had their words modified. Just an interesting fact (:
| A Girl Named James chapter 23 . 7/8/2011
I really like your story. It's awesome, the only thing that bothers me is how mean and rather rude Gibbs is, and how Tony and mostly Ziva just let him run their lives without any intent or desire to stand up to him. But that's just me.
| pirate-princess1 chapter 35 . 8/1/2010
AWWWW! Gibbs avenged Kate's death! I love that idea, that Gibbs and Ziva conspired together, to avenge a beloved coworker. And, also, I never thought Tony and Ziva would get a conventional happy ending either, so I like how this one ended, with them technically "together", but still the independent people they are. And, Abby's reaction was very true to her character. Because, she was really good friends with Kate, and although she's friends with Ziva, Kate was like her best friend ever. And, that just can't be forgiven immediately. I love how this story ended, because it shows that Ziva's moving on, and is at peace with what happened, without saying it in so many words. Loved this story as a whole, how it takes you from the very beginning crumbles of their relationship onto the hate and then onto the independent love. LOVED IT! :)
| Jennifer Catlin DiNozzo chapter 35 . 8/1/2010
Love, love, love it! I loved it all! Great chapter and story.
| Betherzz chapter 35 . 8/1/2010
wow what an ending, not very romantic at all for any of them, and ziva deciding on a dog is weird, ya know a dog needs attention and all of them work way way to much to have a dog, a cat maybe since they can be independent and dont need to go for walks and use a litter box... as for tony & ziva? the 2 of them moving around like that? kind of a waste of cash, expensive, kinda wondering where the 2 came up with large amounts of cash to be able to move around frequently like that and break leases... the diamond ring with words of regret inscribed in it? what the hell? anyway i suppose its an ending
thanks for the story
| fanoftiva chapter 35 . 8/1/2010
Although I agree that walking off into the sunset would be cheesy, I have to say this ending seemed convoluted to me. Sorry, not trying to be mean, but why would she have told them the truth if she was guilty? Tony would be able to tell if she was lying cause they can see right through each other. Abby was, IMHO, unreasonably OOC. And the whole T/Z finding excuses to not break up? IDK, just seemed forced. But at least you implied that they were committed to trying forever.
| zats chapter 35 . 8/1/2010
Caught up on the chapters I missed. Enjoyed all of them. Tony and Ziva have a strange, but works relationship. Hope to read more.
| pirate-princess1 chapter 34 . 7/20/2010
How would Gibbs get around doing that? The first part of this about how Kate was a person made me tear up, so much so that I had to stop and breathe. The last part, with Ari, made me laugh and just happy. UPDATE SOON! :)
| Jennifer Catlin DiNozzo chapter 34 . 7/20/2010
Okay great chapter and all but it has been awhile since I read this and I am confused: when did Gibbs become Director of NCIS? Anyways, I can't wait for the next one!
| fanoftiva chapter 34 . 7/20/2010
This was a good explanation, but just like in canon, not sure why Mossad would want her at NCIS. They would gain more from the FBI or CIA because those agencies work more along the lines of what Mossad does. Still interesting chapter though.
| polarpi chapter 33 . 7/9/2010
Wow - that was a twist I didn't expect! Looking forward to the next chapter! :)
| Jennifer Catlin DiNozzo chapter 33 . 7/6/2010
It supposedly makes sense . . . but not to me. Please, please explain because I am very confused. Anyways, I love this chapter and I can't wait for the next one!
| Supermegafoxyawesomehot7 chapter 33 . 7/6/2010
Oh my gawd...that's bad news bears!
| pirate-princess1 chapter 33 . 7/5/2010
OMG. OMG. OMG! This is such a twist. I didn't understand at first either, but that is HUGE. UPDATE SOON! :O