|Reviews for His Butler, My Master|
| Guest chapter 35 . 2/3
WHY HAVE U ABANDONED THIS BEAUTIFUL PEICE OF ART?! this is amazing please like beggz olease update and finish this!
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/19/2013
Listen here woman. If this is your firt try your gonna do great things one day. Shit like shaking God's hand. You are the best first timer I've seen on this site. Maybe it's cause you have prior experience? That's the only reason I can think of to explain your skill...
| Jan chapter 35 . 10/20/2013
I seriously hope this hasn't been dropped! Such a long time since the last update though :'(
| Hika chapter 35 . 10/20/2013
Come baaaaaaaack x'(
| compass96 chapter 34 . 7/19/2013
3: Apart from that, did Sebastian seriously think a twelve year old human child who had never worked before would compare to him a thousands years demon. Really? So lets say i believe Sebastian that he did all just to see if he was valued as a person and he did all the old house new house thing to keep him comfortable/. So what's with all the starving and punishment. he tortured a twelve year old. It does not matter that Ciel is older and tougher than most, he is still a twelve year old boy , Sebastian tortured him and now he comes back to say it was for his own good? Tough love that. one more thing, Sebastian calls Ciel a whore and says he did not reduce him to what he is. Sebastian has no right to say that and Ciel should not feel guilty for his actions. he chose the option that based on all he could see was the better one. in fact, i must applaud the author for making him running away. Sebastian has no right to call him a whore. he broke their trust even if he didn't break the contract. even if Ciel had prepared himself for pain he had done it knowing that it would soon be over and by 'saving' him, Sebastian destroyed what they had. if it was me, i would 'whore' myself out too. so Sebastian has no right blaming Ciel that is just cowardice.
To the Author, sorry if this turns out to be a rant but i detested reading the rubbish that came out of Sebastian's mouth. Apart from that, i truly enjoyed your characterisation of Sebastian and Grell. that was them true to the core. i Just didn't like the silly excuse nor his inability to own up to his actions. they annoyed me. in all, i enjoyed reading the story.
| compass96 chapter 35 . 7/19/2013
After reading all the chapters and looked at the excuses of the characters, I find that Sebastian's is not only very weak but very illogical.
1: Sebastian claims he gave Ciel all that work and torture because he wanted to know whether he had been considered a tool or not. I can't believe this excuse because in the first chapters, it is apparent that he does what he does to Ciel to keep himself amused and as a form of torture for Ciel. Besides, it is obvious that Ciel only considers him a tool. After all, Ciel even calls him a chess piece and even a weapon! So obviously the answer was that he was only a tool to Ciel. That was the way the contract was: Ciel looked at him as a tool and Sebastian regarded him as meal about to be eaten, that was the way it was. There was no need to keep him alive and torture Ciel just to answer the question we already knew the answers to.
2: Everything Sebastian says sounds like whining to me and honestly can't believe that Sebastian would lower himself to whine. its like his saying- "since i worked so hard why don't you do the same and see how it feels. in my opinion this is completely ooc. Sebastian would never complain about all the work he had to do. For him, it would simply be the cooking to make the meat soft enough. Him enslaving Ciel because of the work he made him do is in my opinion something that Sebastian is unlikely to do. I think that it would be insult his pride for him to moan about all the work he put into making Ciel perfect for eating. IMO, Sebastian would never do this if he was IC.
3: It is a bit difficult for me to believe that Sebastian tortured Ciel just to make his servitude interesting. i can't believe that despite the years he has lived, he would naively believe that making Ciel work in the house that he had being master of, wearing a close resemblance of his father's face, forging Ciel's will and taking the name of Phantomhive would truly make Ciel happy enough to serve him. Come now, Sebastian is not so stupid. You want me to believe that he did not know the effect this would have on Ciel? i don't argue with your portrayal of Sebastian, indeed it is your story. However, this Sebastian is based on the one in the anime and i don't believe he would give such foolish excuses. Isn't it better to portray him as the devil that he is simply marinating his food than a fanciful man who can't even give good excuses to his actions. it would have been better to hear him say he did all that to make Ciel sweeter than for him to claim that he was trying to give him some semblance of comfort.
Apart from that, why it completely believable that Sebastian would renege on his deal, to do so at the advise of Grell is a bit weird. Sebastian clearly haters the shinigami. however, you could be trying to show his coldbloodedness by accepting advice from someone he hates that badly. it is like him.
| Guest chapter 35 . 7/6/2013
Love this story to pieces, I've literally read the story at least three to four times since I've seen it, and that was back when you made chapter 18. I really hope you think of updating this awesome story soon and haven't forgotten about it! \TT/
| AccidentProned chapter 35 . 6/17/2013
this wait is killing me. it hasnt been dropped right?
| Aservis Roturier chapter 17 . 6/7/2013
A very good job on this chapter. You've divined quite accurately, I think, the personalities of Ciel, Grell and the little girl were they all placed in this situation. I like that Ciel has become someone else's butler, so he better appreciates the job, and the interlude with the stolen perfume was masterful.
| Selvaspeedy chapter 31 . 4/6/2013
This is very interesting. I'm loving your characterization of Sebastian in this fic. A lot of other authors totally miss the fact that he's in fact a demon. He's mostly depicted as this sweet and loving romantic interest. Here his character is, imo, spot on and very IC if I may add.
| Selvaspeedy chapter 30 . 4/6/2013
You obviously take pleasure torturing the poor boy.
LOL jk. I love your story to pieces. It's very emotional and very well-written too. Awesome job.
| Selvaspeedy chapter 28 . 4/6/2013
Poor Dahlia. I can understand Ciel getting this angry at her, but he was way too cruel. The poor girl.
| Guest chapter 35 . 2/13/2013
OMG plz plz PLZZZZ update this story is amazing and addictive, you are an amazing writer and I would LOVE to know what happens next!
| G0ldThrone chapter 35 . 2/5/2013
Nooooooo! I just got to the end cause you haven't updated in forever!
| G0ldThrone chapter 30 . 1/31/2013
Crying crying crying. Ciel you poor thing!