Reviews for 254 AM Somewhere east of Liberal, Kansas
Adelled chapter 1 . 9/23/2014
Loved the way this begins - a threatening situation - and ends with a sweet revelation.
thena-ditey chapter 1 . 10/30/2011
R J Lupin's Kat chapter 1 . 9/19/2010
Beautiful... beautiful.


Poor Marshall. ;~)
RomanCandles chapter 1 . 5/2/2010
Very cute!
sagey chapter 1 . 4/13/2010

Kay8abc chapter 1 . 12/5/2009
I was very confused till I got to the end, then I could not stop laughing.

Tursipiel Althins chapter 1 . 8/16/2009
Hahaha epicness...I love it.
He-will-knock-4-times chapter 1 . 8/7/2009
Ok that was an unexpected totally amazingful ending! If only they could put this in an episode :D
superwoman1015 chapter 1 . 8/1/2009
This was so not what I was expecting, i loved it.
ryn chapter 1 . 7/30/2009
AHAHAHHA... that was AMAZING. ] You're brilliant, and this was a very, very delightful piece of travesty. Bravo, bravo! You should totally write more! :D
dumblonde2008 chapter 1 . 7/30/2009
I loved it!

BTW I used to live in Liberal! lol chapter 1 . 7/30/2009
Wow! This was great! It was very clever, funny, and Marshall is completely in character. I really like the build up to finding out what's going on.

Oh, and this part had me in stitches!

"But now Marshall knew the truth about their Office Administrator. And the truth was more scary than anything Mary had imagined.

And now it was down to Marshall to kill her.

For he alone knew the truth.

Eleanor was Satan."

Awesome job! ]
yankee306 chapter 1 . 7/30/2009
So great! You've got perfect pacing for gradually revealing what's going on. I especially like the bit about calling Mary.


breath s/b breathe

so not s/b so as not

period missing after mind

wondering s/b wandering

passed s/b past

fall out s/b fallout

Yes, I do a lot of copy editing.)
PollyCrackers chapter 1 . 7/30/2009
I enjoyed this a lot. Marshall felt true to character - I could easily envision him shifting between mortal terror and unthinking affection.
dreamtramp1974 chapter 1 . 7/30/2009
OMG this was a great story. Marshall's voice was spot on.

He'd been awake just twenty minutes and he was already prepared to reveal the locations of several of his witnesses. Only the annoying ones of course, but still...