|Reviews for An illusion, a shadow, a story|
| Ari chapter 1 . 2/11
Wow! That was the first Labyrinth fan fic I've read. Awesome! thanks.
| Disathairne chapter 1 . 2/8
Sneaky sneaky Jareth! Great shot, by the way.
| Bloodsired chapter 1 . 7/28/2013
I almost believed the prophesy thing! I applaud your brilliant mind and Jareth's trickery. I guess a bit of deception wouldn't hurt. ;)
| Robin G. Fellow chapter 1 . 7/26/2013
Well played, Jareth, well played. It's incredibly messed up, but you can't deny that it's brilliant. You did a good job playing with what we, the readers expected.
| BiblioMatsuri chapter 1 . 7/13/2013
*snaps fingers* The "serial tricking" sounded right, so I never even thought that the story might be false. Sarah always did want very much to be special.
...Now I officially don't know what the plan or the real story was, which was most likely the whole point.
| Anon chapter 1 . 2/24/2013
Dang Jareth. I loved the ending!
| Evara Silvaen chapter 1 . 12/30/2012
Woooooaaaaaah. Was not expecting that last bit. Well played.
| FarGreenCountrySwiftSunrise chapter 1 . 12/29/2012
BAH! Jareth, you sneaky little goblin.
I could totally see Jareth doing this. Thanks for writing this story.
| Jenuefa chapter 1 . 10/9/2012
this spoilt brat of a king!
I'm still on the edge about this twist at the end- although it was genious!
On the other hand it is a very pretty story and damn good written. :)
| Stuffed Piggy chapter 1 . 9/22/2012
. . O.O You've officially blown my mind. That last bit totally came out of left field, but was something to be expected from Jareth. I love this piece of fiction. It shows just how easy it would be for Sarah to be manipulated, and how a Goblin King of old would get what he want without too much fuss. I applaud your creativity because it has left me with my mouth hanging open in shock and admiration.
| xdanishxpastryx chapter 1 . 8/9/2012
Loved the twist!
| CheeryRaindrops chapter 1 . 6/12/2012
Wow, I love it! You really kept Jareth's character and put a cool spin on things. Great twist!
| KAM wuz here chapter 1 . 3/27/2012
omg! that ending seems so evil of Jareth! but, at least Sarah learned to truly love him, so it's not like he really forced her into anything. so did not see that ending coming. AWESOME JOB! i loved this!
| LiteraryRomantic chapter 1 . 1/11/2012
I really enjoyed this, up until the point that Jareth shows himself to be a manipulative bastard. but i continued to enjoy in spite of it, so well done. A likable anti-hero (because I definitely wouldn't put him in the hero category) is one of the most impossible things, at least in my opinion, to write, so brava.
| The.Lost.Thoughts chapter 1 . 8/16/2011
I loved it, and the fact that Jareth still tricked her to get what he wanted. It's so like him, but I can't be mad. :)