Reviews for The Ancient
amy.campbell.378199 chapter 50 . 10/16
I liked the love between J&B in this story but wish there was more on Amara and her new found love...
amy.campbell.378199 chapter 48 . 10/16
Disappointed that the story has come to an end and Bella is finally changed. I would have liked to see more of the vampire Bella.
amy.campbell.378199 chapter 44 . 10/16
Edward? Really? I don't see the fit...
amy.campbell.378199 chapter 45 . 10/16
Have to say that I am super surprised that Victoria didn't attack.
amy.campbell.378199 chapter 39 . 10/15
I was wondering if Amara would sense Loki... Surprising that he came to a quick end.
amy.campbell.378199 chapter 25 . 10/14
Hmmm, the reintroduction of the Cullens should be interesting. I am not sure how peaceful it would be with Edward and Alice in the picture again. At least we now know how Alice had her picture not the past... Unfortunately it also alerted Aro.
amy.campbell.378199 chapter 8 . 10/9
Wow! That is a quick turnaround for Bella considering that she was unable to get out of bed the day before and now she is out shopping...
amy.campbell.378199 chapter 4 . 10/8
Ok, totally didn't think the ancient would be female...
amy.campbell.378199 chapter 2 . 10/8
The first two chapters has me totally hooked! I don't even care if the Cullen are in this story. I want to know more about the blue eyed vampire.
Guest chapter 6 . 1/17/2016
Ok, so I tried to get the past the spelling mistakes but that plus your OC turned me off this story. Will try to read another chapter but I really dislike the focus on her since I really dislike OCs
andrewpine chapter 6 . 1/12/2016
andrewpine chapter 5 . 1/12/2016
though not tho...where is this going? the Cullens have left because fairy boy had a hissy fit due to his was caused by Carlisle's stupidity in changing the spoiled child too soon and him not teaching him how to be a real vampire and not knowing the difference between the mating pull and the singer pull.
andrewpine chapter 3 . 1/12/2016
Beta .
andrewpine chapter 2 . 1/12/2016
Stupid girl needs to grow up stop the pity party and move on with her life she does not need to mourn the closeted fairy the old one see her in it's mind? what will it do for her?will it blank her mind of any thoughts of the douche bag that hurt her?
andrewpine chapter 1 . 1/12/2016
This creature whomever it is was the first vampire,right?... it is knew not should have track fairy boy down and killed let see where you are going with this story. i gather it is looking for Carlisle so how are Bella and Jasper involved? does it put them together to spite fairy boy Eddie? please tell me it punishes fairy boy for eternity.
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