|Reviews for The Geeks Get the Girls “Off the Page” Contest|
| AStoryReader chapter 1 . 7/31/2009
Hahaha. I especially enjoyed the last part, where Jasper texted Edward, and where he realized he forgot to get her number. A geeky Edward is such a turn-on. Thanks for sharing! I'll be sure to check out this contest!
| mirrorlight31 chapter 1 . 7/31/2009
| ellis1516 chapter 1 . 7/31/2009
Get-r-done - i do believe that phrase belongs to larry the cable guy! Blue Collar Comedy Rocks, as does Doctor Who and meadow fun times! Cool story!
| bluevolvic chapter 1 . 7/31/2009
Aw! that was freaking brilliant :)
I loved the story idea,I thought it was sweet Edward getting up infront of the school, and declaring his me giggle that they both had so much in common(yay for Doctor who),yet didn't know.
I hope he gets her phone number hehe :)
| jennlynnfs chapter 1 . 7/31/2009
That was really sweet. I love it when Geekward gets some loving. :D
| thewasofshall chapter 1 . 7/31/2009
I haven't seen "I Love You, Beth Cooper" but your take on it is fantastic. Witty, sexy, and a bit of nerd porn thrown in (which I absolutely love, by the way).
| KimberlyAnnT chapter 1 . 7/31/2009
I loved this story... lol about the Text...
| cfangs chapter 1 . 7/31/2009
| WhosThat chapter 1 . 7/31/2009
what a pleasure it is to read your fantastically written stories. I'm so glad that you have the following that you rightfully deserve. Brava chica!
| altdolf85 chapter 1 . 7/31/2009
This was great! I loved the characterization here, and Edward's inner monologues were perfect!
| Anono-miss chapter 1 . 7/31/2009
HA! "Thank you God, or George Lucas, or whoever made this happen!"
I was cracking up!
| L5472 chapter 1 . 7/31/2009
"What’s the worst that could happen?”
“Utter humiliation, rejection, oh, and possible strangulation by her gorilla by the ex-boyfriend, Jacob.”
LOL! Poor nervous Bookward..
Laughing at these "long stories". Totally need to know about that bra incident LMAO!
Jasper making sounds like a dying dog when Alice came by was hilarious. *cracks up* “My love for her is painful. It burns deep within my soul”? LOL!
Loved Edwards speech TO DEATH. Like..wow. That was a great ending message to the cheerleaders, jocks, smarties, Jasper, Jacob and Bella, ha!
Glad Alice and Jasper ended up going out together. Guess Jasper can't yell at Edward anymore, huh? Go Bella for telling Jake off! What a jerk..
Meadow lemon? Yum. Edward's inner commentary was hilarious.
"Again, he had to refrain from squealing as he felt the smoothness of her thighs."
"He gawked in awe as Bella’s breasts lay before him, and the teenage boy urge to just stick his head between them and shake it was unbelievably strong."
Anyways, very sexy.
Continuation? Pretty please? *flutters eyelashes* Don't make me get my [non-existent] Edward Cullen perfume out!
| EsmeRose chapter 1 . 7/31/2009
Will you be adding to this after voting? I loved it. So cute and OOC.
| may-bell-rose chapter 1 . 7/31/2009
i thought it started slow but the end resluts were great!
even better for Edward LOL
hope you win
| Possession chapter 1 . 7/30/2009
I enjoyed it very much. Very sweet. You should continue it as a full on story.