|Reviews for Mayonaka|
| KAy chapter 8 . 1/18
interesting plot pleaseeee udpate soon! why is this on haitus!
| Zs chapter 8 . 1/18
ARE YOU OKAY?.. srry dint mean to shout its just that you havent updated in a while and noticed the caps lock was on to late and got to lazy to erase it _'
| ThaliaTrisEllie chapter 8 . 12/19/2013
Oh my gods. WHY IS THIS ON HIATUS!? This is too good a masterpiece to be thrown away so flippantly and be put on hold! THIS IS NOT FAIR!
| Guest chapter 8 . 8/26/2013
This story is...just wow. I can't believe that I have only discovered it now, because this story is so amazing! First of all, this whole repeat story idea is very interesting, and it's only better because it's KaiShin...I just really like this pairing. x3
Let me just say that I aww'd so much at some moments, and I felt so sorry for both of them. Seeing Shinichi's point of view, especially, is very heart wrenching. One thing I really love is how both Kaito and Shinichi's characterization is so believable. It really is like, 'Oh, if Shinichi had lived his life over 12 times, and Kaito following, this really would be how they act'. Things like Shinichi not in love with Ran anymore, or Kaito's absolute clingyness to Shinichi just felt only natural considering their circumstances, and I feel like the excellent writing really just flowed in a way that it seemed only right for them to act like that.
I also really love the way that Kaito and Shinichi absolutely seem to need each other. xD Especially how both of them are so determined to keep the other safe. Kaito's realization that he's in love is just so adorable too. I think Shinichi might be unconsciously feeling the same way...?
Aside from that, the plot of this story is also very interesting! I am very intrigued by all the mentions of Shinichi's past lives, particularly his second. I'm guessing that from the way he probably changed everything at that life, something horrible happens to Ai and Agasa? And more of his loved ones I assume, but it seems definite that there is something wrong with those two. I wonder how exactly Shinichi died the first time anyway, and does that have anything to do with why it seems he's trapped living his life over and over again? And really, what happens if Shinichi doesn't transform to Conan? Hmmm...I'm so curious and I dont have a clue. I'm guessing that magic may have something to do with this, if the long haired girl that was staring at Shinichi was Akako though.
After I finished reading, I was sad to see that this story hasn't been updated in a while, but that doesn't mean that I didn't thoroughly enjoy it. I love this story so much that I just had to review it! xD So thank you very much for this story, and I do apologize for how messily unorganized this review is. x.x Although if I had good writing skills, I would already have an account here lol. Mayonaka is amazing! If you're still writing it, I am immensely looking forward to the next chapter!
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/26/2013
Please do add another chapter! I really, really adore this serie! 3
| m-chan chapter 8 . 7/31/2013
second lives really are bad
trying to wrap ones head around it
panicking and desperately trying to fix everything
only to find nothing works and everything goes wrong
no idea where you guys are
its really been a while hasnt it
take back interest in the series
| violet-snowflake chapter 8 . 4/25/2013
are you going to continue your story?
when i saw the lenght of your chapters i couldn't believe my good luck. Then i began reading your story and realized that its plot is freaking awesome! timetravel is a personal favorite of mine, combined with this pairing and your overall storyline and i had to stop myself from drooling!
i just wanted to compliment you a little to motivate you to write another chapter (big hint)
nevertheless everything i said was my true opinion!
| GeekyInternetIntrovert chapter 1 . 4/17/2013
Still waitin', still hopin'
| SethBlackwolf chapter 8 . 3/25/2013
This is so awesome! I can't wait for more!
| SilkStar chapter 8 . 2/9/2013
Okay. So, this story? It's AWESOME! I actually clicked on this through a recs page. I was hesitant because I hate reading fics that aren't completed and haven't been updated for awhile. But I totally don't regret it...well, much anyways.
I love the plotline! I love time travel-ish fics so finding one for this fandom made my day. I love the long chapters as well and how it's so well written, especially for a round robin fic. Usually the round robin fics I've come across aren't very good. They seem disjointed because each person as such different styles of writing. It'll be one author is good but the others are not. What I like about this one is that even if it round robin the styles mesh together very nicely and everything flows.
I also like the characterizations. Shinichi does seem a bit gloomy to me but I think it's because this is the most angst I've ever read him. On the other hand, I can't wait to see how he develops as a character and how he changes as he rediscovers hope. Kaito, on the other hand, I think is very well written. It's one of the better portrayals I've read and I like how he's so him but he's also a him that's been changed by what's he's been through. I do like how you portrayed his relationships and how they're disconnected because of what's happened. It's not just him coming back and everything's the same. It's changed because he's different. That said, I want to read more about how they will change versus how they will stay the same.
I know it's been like, almost three years since you've guys updated but I'm hoping nothing's wrong except difficulties in writing. I'm really hoping the muse for this isn't dead or it's veered off so totally than what was planned that you've decided to scrap it. Lastly, I'm also really hoping that your inspiration hits you and you get to update soon!
| redlaama chapter 8 . 11/25/2012
wow! It's sad that there r no more chapters, I'd love to see more though.. I gotta say my favorite is chapter 7! I't too funny how everyone reacted to Kaito's epiphany! Poor Kaito XD
| Clare chapter 8 . 10/30/2012
And here it ends, possibly forever...Just when the next (or the one after) chapter would possibly have been pretty exciting...
I won't try to get my hopes up, but I look forward to your next fantastic piece.
| Mai-chan63 chapter 3 . 9/30/2012
There she was, standing there in the light of the dying sun looking so bewildered. It was an image that would forever remind Shinichi of what he had lost, of the things he could never have.
I don't know why, but my heart broke at that.
| Ginshi-chan chapter 8 . 9/23/2012
And things are all heating up!
| Klappy chapter 8 . 7/8/2012
One word: UPDATE.
You were right about the round-robin writing style, but I could care less. What I care about is the "soul" that this story has, and shoot me if anyone dares to deny that. So I hope you two won't leave this baby on the dump; I'm a big fan of both of your works, and this takes the cake. Kudos!