|Reviews for One Chance|
| DannieRaRa chapter 11 . 2/1
Remember: at that time, The Bingleys are richer than the Bennetts. However, the Bennetts are of a higher social class. They, unlike the Bingleys, are landed gentry.
| Mary Hyde chapter 13 . 7/7/2013
Regarding your author's note: the correct method of using paragraphs for dialog is to start a new paragraph whenever the person speaking OR acting changes. Your usage leads to confusion by combining one character's dialog with another's actions and is actually incorrect.
| Guest chapter 11 . 5/17/2013
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| kmart92 chapter 16 . 11/12/2012
Please please please tell me you're planning on updating soon? I'm desperate for more! I'm absolutely in love with this story - please continue!
| Lolita-chi chapter 12 . 4/17/2012
Please update soon.
| Lenpen chapter 16 . 3/25/2012
Though it doesn't appear likely that the author will return to this story, I really would have liked to see how it ended. It's an interesting angle. Darcy comes across as a bit of a psychopath and Elizabeth seems to be decending into madness. It's intriging to conjecture how, indeed if a happy ending will come about.
| cdb33 chapter 16 . 1/14/2012
I just wanted to say that I really enjoyed this story! I think that you've dealt realistically with the growing pains of these characters had they been in this situation at this point in the story. Great work and thanks for posting.
| Jadie47 chapter 15 . 12/30/2011
I see that you haven't updated this story in a long time. I hope that you will be doing so soon.
I have gotten hooked into seeing how you would fix things as they are.
| Rose chapter 15 . 11/30/2011
I really like your story. Please finish it!
| Rose chapter 16 . 11/30/2011
Excellent story! Please finish!
| Martine Boulanger chapter 15 . 11/15/2011
And kissed her soundly. OMG, when I imagine that I start to laugh xD .. love it so far though, keep on writing!
| taswmom chapter 16 . 9/14/2011
Are you going to update again soon? I sincerely hope so. For one, it will get one more story out of my incomplete file, and for two, I would really like to rest of this story! I love that Lizzy is turning around and that Darcy is coming out of his shell.
Please update soon! Thanks.
| jackiemack916 chapter 16 . 9/10/2011
Hi, I just wanted to let you know that I very much enjoyed your story. I was wondering if there is more to it? Do you plan on posting again?
| lv2wski chapter 16 . 6/29/2011
I really like your story and I hope you continue writing! I look forward to the next updates you have. So write quickly! I also thought i'd let you know that I like your plot...it is very creative and I think you captured the personas of lizzy and darcy very well. Write soon!
| gracie789 chapter 1 . 6/20/2011
I just found this one. Interesting premise. I look forward to a good explore. It does move a bit fast so far, but you've left it in a good place.
Thanks for this.