| Reviews for Finding Home |
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   ColdSilver chapter 1 . 7/31/2009 This is so awesome! I absolutely love this fic! I love your writing style! I read your oneshot 'Infamy' and i knew i just HAD to read this! I'm so excited that your carrying this story on! I cant get enough of it! I was so heartbroken when I read Infamy, and i couldnt believe you could leave us hanging like that! I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE IF EDWARD COMES BACK! |
| Lucette212 chapter 1 . 7/31/2009 Lovely start Jenn. The major difference I picked up on was the talk with Charlie and unfortunately it is making me ever sadder that YOU KILLED HIM! I just loved the attempted talk about boys and Bella saying that she tells him everything - I would just love to be able to see some more of it. I was wondering, when I read the one shot, just how close Esme is to a mother figure? Did she do some of the things a mother would do (e.g. talk about the birds and bees) in Renee's stead? Thanks for this - I am eagerly awaiting more. |
| Orioncat chapter 1 . 7/31/2009 I'm so happy that you decided to keep this story going. It really was one of my faves. I especially loved the conversation that you had between Bella and Charlie...So sweet. I look foward to your next update! thanks! |
| ahizelm chapter 1 . 7/31/2009 This is simply wonderful. The characterizations are fantastic takes on canon, and I'm very excited to see where this is going. There were a few lines that took my breath away, either because the phrasing was amazing or because the sentiment was just that strong, namely this: "Even at 5, Edward's arms around me made me feel safe." - - I literally had to stop and read this short paragraph twice. Thanks for posting this, lovely. I'll have to thank Daisy for her gentle prodding that I read it. :) |
| maizeandblue chapter 1 . 7/31/2009 Great Chapter! I'm really happy to see that you are continuing with this story. I enjoyed the extra scenes/dialogue/whatever you provided here - I especially enjoyed the conversation between Bella and her father. It provided us with more insight into their relationship. |
| cshorte chapter 1 . 7/31/2009 Great chapter! Loved that you decided to continue this story! Can't wait to read more! |
| profmom72 chapter 1 . 7/31/2009 Congratuations on expanding your story. I am really looking forward to it. The development of the first chapter is great and i love your e/b characterizations! Still adore the early timeline. |
| thinkb4uact chapter 1 . 7/31/2009 So glad your gonna write this story more then a one shot. Loved it whrn you wrote it for the contest. Looking forward to reading more. |
| Twilightobsessed09 chapter 1 . 7/30/2009 Glad to see that you're continuing this fantastic story. Can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon... |
| kneon chapter 1 . 7/30/2009 Thank you for continuing this story. It was one of my favorites in the contest. I can't wait to see where you are going to take this story. I can forsee some struggles. |
| jennayg123 chapter 1 . 7/30/2009 I can't tell you how happy I am that you decided to continue this story! Not that I didn't love Infamy, but reading the complete story is amazing! I'm so excited for it and I can't wait for the next chapter! |
| vanessarae chapter 1 . 7/30/2009 Jenn, you don't even know how happy I am that you decided to make this a full-blown fic! Yay! |
| janiedoe12 chapter 1 . 7/30/2009 I'm so excited you took everyone's advice and made this more than a one shot...I can't wait for more! |
| lindyrb chapter 1 . 7/30/2009 I'm SO glad you're continuing this story! It was one of my favs in the contest...can't wait to see the whole story! |
| LikeToRead22 chapter 1 . 7/30/2009 Yeah! I can't tell you how glad I am to see you turning this into a full story. I loved the one shot and I'm looking forward to more! Congrats, Jennde! |