Reviews for A Boy With Her Eyes
my 2 guys chapter 8 . 1/20/2017
that was good keep the chapters coming
my 2 guys chapter 7 . 4/21/2016
that was good keep the chapters coming
my 2 guys chapter 6 . 4/21/2016
that was good keep the chapters coming
my 2 guys chapter 5 . 4/21/2016
that was good keep the chapters coming
my 2 guys chapter 4 . 4/21/2016
that was good keep the chapters coming
my 2 guys chapter 3 . 4/21/2016
that was good keep the chapters coming
my 2 guys chapter 2 . 4/21/2016
that was good keep the chapters coming
my 2 guys chapter 1 . 4/20/2016
that was good keep the chapters coming
mndstjohn chapter 8 . 2/2/2013
Yes.
Blume chapter 6 . 4/17/2012
lol, Aloe Vera...

;P

that's a cool nickname, too bad he's dead now... ;
MelanisticLeopard chapter 8 . 3/19/2012
It's a bit confusing

I appreciated the description. :)

I can kinda see why you quit. It's very tangled-but you had a good idea. Really unique. VERY different from other fics! Naruto seemed to be in character. That surprised me a bit. But evil!Jiraiya threw me-I don't think we really got a proper explanation as to why he'd be evil in the first place, & it's just confusing. That wouldn't have ruined the fic for me though. I'd've stuck with it. At least you told us what would've happened.

Your writing isn't too flowery. It actually could've been more detailed.
Yoholic chapter 8 . 1/21/2012
Really confusing, but well detailed
Yoholic chapter 1 . 1/21/2012
Wow this is really original
Saruhno chapter 8 . 11/11/2011
Wow that was actually a really awesome last chapter. :D
Reaper Nanashi chapter 8 . 10/1/2011
Too bad you're not going to finish, but I guess I can see why; with a convoluted storyline like this, not keeping up with the source won't help. Oh well—it was good while it lasted.

Anyway, interesting premise, for sure. Usually, AU!Yondy has brought peace to the world and Naruto is left struggling to fit in. This is a nice reversal. Wasn't quite sure about evil!Jiraiya at first—almost clicked away because I love him too much to see him the bad guy. But I stuck with it. Good for me.

The final explanations do help, by the way. So thank you.

~RN (LS)
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