Reviews for She'll Never Know
Excitedmfan chapter 1 . 5/9/2002
The insanity for it all! AHHHHH
Allianora2 chapter 1 . 3/8/2002
Great job! :) It's nice to read what could be going on behind those big baby brown eyes. More please! :)
qsmadness007 chapter 1 . 3/7/2002
That's very cute, you have splendid characterization. keep up the good work, chicky
Disgruntled Peony chapter 1 . 1/24/2002
Man, I can truly identify with this story... You did a very good job on this, and I daresay you captured Ed's character perfectly. Poor boy, he needs a hug! Anyway, congrats on the great job you did on this fic. :)
leslie chapter 1 . 1/8/2002
Darien-

I love the approach you're taking with this story. I don't believe there's

been another fan fiction writer that has focuses solely on Ed's POV, diving

deep into Ed's thoughts about the events they're facing. If you decide to

continue, this would make a very interesting story...Ed's thoughts

about Sloan, Tom, their relationship. It might even be fun to base your

whole story on everyone's POV, shifting the reader to what everyone is

thinking but don't have the courage to say outloud. I'm looking forward to

what your mind can create... Wonderful start!
Denise Wichita KS aka Preyshy chapter 1 . 1/6/2002
I think it's a good start from Ed's perspective...carry on with any other ideas that you may have. As long as you have a story line

that you'd like to pursue, you shouldn't have any problems with your writing.
lee stafford chapter 1 . 1/6/2002
I agree with Diane S, this is a great piece and

would be a tremendous prologue to a larger story-

line. I would love to see more. And I can tell you

that we are ALL starving for more good "prey" fic.

Please continue!
Nix chapter 1 . 1/2/2002
*deep sigh* the whole Ed/Sloan thing was such an unexplored area on the show, and it's about time someone wrote about it. This is really well approached, nicely written and I can't wait for you to write more.
Nikki chapter 1 . 1/2/2002
Ok even though I know nothing about the show...lol...I love the fic Chris...It is well written and the way you have him thinking is so real. I have had to have those inner battles when you like a friend in a more than friendly way...lol...Keep up the good work girlie.