Reviews for Sucré Tentations
Rin-Youki chapter 9 . 6/22/2017
Please make more chapters
The Black Maiden chapter 1 . 12/21/2013
This is pretty good, but I do have a few complaints.

Kyoya is a bit OOC, not too badly, but still. I don't think he would stutter like he did when asking her to be his girlfriend, and I don't think (though maybe he would) admit right away that he's really scared. I always see him as...a bit like Mr. Spock. He's always stoic, and nothing fazes him.

Oh, and one grammar mistake, although I'm guessing it was only a typo, when he says "piss a already hormonal woman off," there should be an "an" where the "a" is.

Other than that, your writing style is pretty descriptive. You pay good attention to detail, so that's really good, and Renge seems to be really in-character. All in all, this is a pretty good story. I really like the premise of Renge getting pregnant.
ColorfulPANDA chapter 9 . 4/6/2013
You never gave us chapter 10..
TT_TT
Charmcake chapter 9 . 12/28/2012
im sooo glad kyoya pulled himself together please dont make him an ass anymore
Lena xo chapter 7 . 5/28/2011
Another "other guy" ohmigosh although this one actually is a gentleman...

What happens now D:

Love,

Lena xo
Lena xo chapter 6 . 5/28/2011
Ahaha "You don't have a cell phone!" "Who's fault is that?" "If you weren't such an asshole, you'd still HAVE a cell phone!" XD I quite liked that convo at the end haha at least we're getting onto the realisations _ _ gosh i hope you haven't abandoned this fic

Love,

Lena xo
Lena xo chapter 4 . 5/28/2011
Oooh ooooooooh D: D: D: THE DRAMA INTENSIFIES :O Poor Renge...

Love,

Lena xo
Lena xo chapter 2 . 5/28/2011
Mmm dark Kyoya, can't argue with that

I liked the contrast between the fathers _

Love,

Lena xo
Lena xo chapter 1 . 5/28/2011
LOLOLOLOL ok I haven't even finished the chapter yet but this is freakin hilarious XD

"Will you be my girlfriend?"

"I'M PREGNANT WITH YOUR CHILD."

"...yeah I figured."

XD I mean i didn't really think about it but... of course Kyouya would know XD

Very Kyouya like indeed...

Love,

Lena xo
Samhan chapter 1 . 11/9/2010
like it
Uso Dori chapter 9 . 9/12/2010
You want to get updated soon, but you haven't for eight months.
Melissa1991 chapter 9 . 5/24/2010
I love it!
Cupcake.Chan.95 chapter 9 . 3/26/2010
I like this story a lot

The pairing, the storyline and your way of writing, i just enjoy reading this

So you can count on me reading and commenting this when you upload it- you will, won't you?

*puppy look*

anyway, great story, i just added it to my fav's

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SweetTEmariOfTheSand chapter 9 . 3/6/2010
i luv it luv it luv it plz write more!
mickeykity chapter 9 . 1/3/2010
I had forgotten this was on here! Thanks for the update! I worrying that Kyouya would just contiune to be a dick to Renge forever!
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