Reviews for Quick and Dirty
livvy15274 chapter 1 . 9/24/2012
the story was really cool and kinda sad because max died. still really cool.
Dot902 chapter 1 . 7/9/2010
Oh. My. Gosh.

That was unbelievably heart broke for little Angel and the flock.I'm speechless, it's that are a great author.
gigi14.15 chapter 1 . 11/20/2009
That was brilliant. I judge how good a story is by how much emotion it makes me show, and I was definitely crying from the beginning of your story. I love stories that have such emotion in them.

It was also surprisingly realistic - I think the flock could end up like that.

By the way, Angel is so brave!
Kimsa Ki-Lurria chapter 1 . 9/6/2009
That was a surprisingly good, tragic read. An interesting perspective into what the future could have held for the flock. Well done.

-Kimsa
Kiliro chapter 1 . 8/3/2009
Oh my god. This is so sad. But it's a really great story. I love it. Really, I do. It's amazing.

-K
carino2 chapter 1 . 8/2/2009
Whoa. That was powerful, and one of the best things I've read lately. Where to begin?

First, with the theme, I guess: I loved how you repeated "quick and dirty" throughout the whole piece. It gave it a sort of poetic feel, which was lovely.

And the story itself was realistic; definitely believable.

One thing:

"Show them what you’re made of Angel."

I probably would have put a comma before "Angel." Other than being nitpicky with your grammar, I have no crit?

I loved the telepathy inhibitor. That's a great idea.

And the ending? Perfect.
Of.Winged.Poets chapter 1 . 7/31/2009
Damn, that rocked. Pardon my French. That was freakin' awesome.
imadinorawr chapter 1 . 7/31/2009
omg
CarnivorousOak chapter 1 . 7/31/2009
I've always known Angel had it in her. well done.
Pray for me. Pray chapter 1 . 7/31/2009
Oh...it makes my heart break for the flock. Especially Angel. As usual, wonderfully written. Sigh.