|Reviews for Quick and Dirty|
| livvy15274 chapter 1 . 9/24/2012
the story was really cool and kinda sad because max died. still really cool.
| Dot902 chapter 1 . 7/9/2010
Oh. My. Gosh.
That was unbelievably heart broke for little Angel and the flock.I'm speechless, it's that are a great author.
| gigi14.15 chapter 1 . 11/20/2009
That was brilliant. I judge how good a story is by how much emotion it makes me show, and I was definitely crying from the beginning of your story. I love stories that have such emotion in them.
It was also surprisingly realistic - I think the flock could end up like that.
By the way, Angel is so brave!
| Kimsa Ki-Lurria chapter 1 . 9/6/2009
That was a surprisingly good, tragic read. An interesting perspective into what the future could have held for the flock. Well done.
| Kiliro chapter 1 . 8/3/2009
Oh my god. This is so sad. But it's a really great story. I love it. Really, I do. It's amazing.
| carino2 chapter 1 . 8/2/2009
Whoa. That was powerful, and one of the best things I've read lately. Where to begin?
First, with the theme, I guess: I loved how you repeated "quick and dirty" throughout the whole piece. It gave it a sort of poetic feel, which was lovely.
And the story itself was realistic; definitely believable.
"Show them what you’re made of Angel."
I probably would have put a comma before "Angel." Other than being nitpicky with your grammar, I have no crit?
I loved the telepathy inhibitor. That's a great idea.
And the ending? Perfect.
| Of.Winged.Poets chapter 1 . 7/31/2009
Damn, that rocked. Pardon my French. That was freakin' awesome.
| imadinorawr chapter 1 . 7/31/2009
| CarnivorousOak chapter 1 . 7/31/2009
I've always known Angel had it in her. well done.
| Pray for me. Pray chapter 1 . 7/31/2009
Oh...it makes my heart break for the flock. Especially Angel. As usual, wonderfully written. Sigh.