|Reviews for Present Danger|
| hungryjunco chapter 4 . 1/22/2010
Ha, ha, ha. These are all very nicely done, although the last is by far my favorite. Keep up the good work!
| FirstDraft chapter 4 . 1/15/2010
No more food related stories PLEASE. Now feeling desperate for ice-cream...
| Deceptivecadence chapter 4 . 12/18/2009
IT WAS JANE!
That sly hero! That crafty protector of sandwiches! That charming guardian of lunch-time fare!
| Deceptivecadence chapter 2 . 12/18/2009
I am in hysterics!
Love Rigsby's 'which one to have first' dilemma. And Cho's 'If they start feeding each other, i'm leaving'.
Poor Van Pelt. Trying to be strong when even Lisbon caved. Looking at that dessert the way Rigsby looks at her when he thinks no one is watching. Rigsby scoffing down baked apples, blissfully unawares.
Bless their little cotton socks.
| Ana Sedai chapter 4 . 12/13/2009
Oh, Jane, Jane, Jane. You little devil, you. Scaring a new recruit like that...it's not very nice. You probably saved his bacon (the thought of a rampaging Rigsby is almost too awful to contemplate), but threatening him with, well, yourself? That's just low. ;)
Although the idea of the jerk who pointed the newbie toward the forbidden food being hypnotized into singing, "Sittin' On Top of the World" is quite amusing...
Great work, as always! Now, when can we expect more of "Red Roses"? Not that I'm impatient or anything. I'm just...curious. Really. ;)
| Viktorija chapter 4 . 12/11/2009
I loved all chapters:))
| Malley chapter 4 . 12/11/2009
Nice work! I love the descriptions of all of the characters in The Joy of Snacks. So true (Jane is so devious:))
| House Calls chapter 4 . 12/11/2009
Ah, what a great series of one-shots! Very well done! :-D
| mabeline36 chapter 4 . 12/11/2009
That was so funny, totally brilliant piece of writing! Absolutely typical Jane behaviour in my opinion. Really enjoyed it hun xx
| lisbon69 chapter 4 . 12/11/2009
chuckle* nice lol...
| celticgina chapter 4 . 12/10/2009
I love your twisted little mind! Thank you!
Love that we both have Rigsby pulling people's arms off and beating them with it. GMTA!
| amurderofcrows chapter 4 . 12/10/2009
Good things come in small packages, but so does C-4? Thanks for making me laugh, I needed some cheering up.
| mwalter1 chapter 4 . 12/10/2009
Ah Jane, such a naughty boy... :-) Loved the description of Cho's meatloaf from mom. Good to see you back writing!
| yaba chapter 4 . 12/10/2009
aahahha man you never disappoint. lovely update. incredibly funny, and distracts me from the fact that you haven't update TRR for a month now. gr woman! Anyway, great little comments about what each character would do if you stole their lunch, loved the -fire testing meatloaf LOL. Looking forward to more :)
| Ebony10 chapter 4 . 12/10/2009
ROFL! That was fantastic!
“That saying that good things come in small packages? So does C-4. You don't want to take Senior Agent Lisbon's lunch. On a good day, she might just throw you into a wall." LMAO! Wonderful...