|Reviews for Present Danger|
| Ebony10 chapter 2 . 10/29/2009
ROFL! Perfect. *drools* I can't decide what is causing me to be envious- Lisbon eating the lovely confection you wrote of or her possession of Jane...damn. Lucky gal.
"If they start feeding each other, he's leaving the table."
Have I mentioned that Cho is the best? And that was so dryly perfect for him. :D
| Aquila1 chapter 2 . 10/29/2009
Very cute. You have this uncanny knack for making what should be out of character behaviour feel completely normal for these two.
| Duskydolphin chapter 2 . 10/29/2009
"If they start feeding each other he's leaving the table." had me in stiches. Typical Cho...
| FiveRoses chapter 2 . 10/29/2009
Cute :) Poor Van Pelt. (So, got distracted again, did you?)
| yaba chapter 2 . 10/28/2009
ahahahhaha "not in public" nice totally love that. you got me giggling and exercising my deepest fantasies, you go girl :)
| between the waves chapter 2 . 10/28/2009
Oh, now that's just not fair.
This is just plain fun, and the ending is awesome.
| Arcadya chapter 2 . 10/28/2009
I love that you can create a whole scene in so few words.
I can really picture it, I so want to be sitting in the adjacent table watching the interplay between people. *sigh*
| Purple Piggie chapter 2 . 10/28/2009
I always look forward to reading your well-written stories. They always have a great sense of humour. My favourite line here was "If they start feeding each other, he's leaving the table." Made me snort!
| Madaboutthementalist chapter 2 . 10/28/2009
Oh my, they really are turning into a couple, aren't they. Sharing desserts in public! What next? ;)
| mwalter1 chapter 2 . 10/28/2009
He surreptitously nudges the fork up against Lisbon's hand, waits to see how long she can resist temptation.
About thirty seconds. Absent-mindedly, Lisbon picks up the fork...
Hm - she lasted about 25 seconds longer than I would!
| ThranduilsDaughter chapter 2 . 10/28/2009
yeah for more fluff! loved especially the first one. naughty jane!
| lisbon69 chapter 2 . 10/28/2009
*claps* outstanding writing, especially this second chapter
fantastic... oh i like Lisbon/jane like this.. notover doing it not toomushy but subtle enouhg to give a little hint... well written... keep it up... o er mrs...
| CKLizzy chapter 1 . 8/9/2009
Very sweet. I'm glad I didn't pay attention to the word count; normally I wouldn't read stories that short ;)
| JocelynMcC chapter 1 . 8/1/2009
Funny! :) xxJo
| Ebony10 chapter 1 . 7/31/2009
Cute! Loved it.
Sneaky, sneaky writing...;)