Reviews for Marked
Fernsfairie chapter 1 . 8/26/2009
You really should continue this story! :D
totally manic chapter 2 . 8/25/2009
this was just awesome! i'm so glad you'll continue, i can't wait to read what's going to happen next! and congratulations for making the finals ;)
Migs4JasperWhitlock chapter 1 . 8/24/2009
Please dont leave it there!

please do a continueation :)

i want really jasward action, not edwards imagination :)

please?
ash902 chapter 1 . 8/18/2009
Please tell me you're considering expanding this story line...again I'm not really into the slash...but the tat contest brought quite alot of that out and what you put down was by far one of the best (IMHO) and anyhow this story needs some resolution...
cravingtwilight chapter 1 . 8/17/2009
holy shit that was hot! loved every min of it! incredibly sexy! Cant't wait for you to continue it! :)
ckcpurple chapter 1 . 8/15/2009
Congrats to you and Naelany! Your story was wonderful. I have to say that before this contest I had never read anything other than B/E stories. However, I decided that I'd read all 26 no matter what. Yours was the first J/E I got too and I surprised my self by loving it! Totally made it into my top 10.

Loved your descriptive writing style and the smoldering hotness. Thanks for having a hand in broadening my reading spectrum. Hope you continue this one!
MeiSun chapter 1 . 8/15/2009
Wonderful story! I love all the "is he/isn't he" uncertainty! Poor Edward.

I hope you'll to the sequel of Mr. Possible coming to look at the pics? ;-D
stilljustceci chapter 1 . 8/14/2009
OMG, I'd love to leave a nice, long, detailed, intelligent review for this but it's really hard to do that when I'm in such need of some time in my bunk. ;) Just... THANK YOU for leaving this WIDE OPEN for more chapters. I added it to Story Alert. And I'll be waiting for more chapters. To be in my Inbox. Soon.

Hint, hint.
mcc101180 chapter 1 . 8/14/2009
Wow. That was so hot, and they didn't even get to do anything.

Very well written, loved the UST. Are you planning on continuing this after the contest wraps?

Marksper in Tattward's shirt and his little strip tease with his zipper has left me ded.

Tattward looking for porn to work one out and falling back on the pictures of Jasper and his growling that Marksper was his, so good.

Tattward realizing that Marksper wasn't his YET and the promise of what was to come in a week's time, has me amped.

Great job, definitely got my vote.
cabr chapter 1 . 8/13/2009
You are such teases! That was very nicely done. Thank you!
coolbreeeze chapter 1 . 8/12/2009
Ladies! So hot! I hope it continues!
bookjunkie1975 chapter 2 . 8/12/2009
Is it wrong that I want this contest to be over so that you guys can get on with the story? The crossed signals between Edward and Jasper are just killing me and I can't wait to see the story play out!
MJPIPER74 chapter 1 . 8/10/2009
The UST in this is off the charts. I am loving photographer Edward. I don't know what it was about Jasper in Edward's shirt that was so extremely hot. I can completely understnd how Edward filled up his memory card with pics of your gorgeous Jasper.

I can't wait for this to be continued.
sariedee chapter 1 . 8/9/2009
WOW! too bad this is just an one shot! my favorite so far!
StarlightSuccubus chapter 1 . 8/7/2009
Ow… naelany! Jenn! I can't fucking wait to see what will happen!

Edward is just so damn cute. He's cool, sophisticated, creative, and so fucking insecure when it comes to Jasper.

Fucking tease...

Mr. Impossible, LOL! Jasper's mystery definitely leaves me with wanting more. This chapter is so full of UST and I love it, love it.

My three favorite parts:

1.- “…day you can bear children…” (my heart clench at this one.)

2.- “Rub for luck”? (I’ll rub it every day Mr. Felix Felicis.)

3.- One week, Mr. Possible. (Ow… And I can’t wait to see what happens when they finally get to see each other.)

This story definitely is awesome and I can’t wait to see what you guys have in store for us. I hope you win because it’s amazing and I loved all the references to the art and stuff. Escher! The stairs drive me crazy!

And naelany… You know about my fixation with all things oral and all things manly parts… Are you effing trying to kill me or what?

You guys did an amazing job, this definitely goes to my faves and I loved the fact that you didn’t go for the full sex scene. I appreciated that factor. How you were able to make it work without needed the sex scene. Granted, you leave us wanting for more, but meh… Gladly wait.

It was so well written and original on this aspect as it was a o/s.

Voting? Me! For who? SorceressCirce and naelany!

XOXO,

Karla

Ps.- I want fucking chicken quesadillas made by Eddie boy... and I wouldn't mind being marked because it was so effing hot... Gah!
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