Reviews for Night Terrors
dmichelle312 chapter 1 . 2/23
A heartwarming story...
Guest chapter 1 . 3/21/2014
very sweet
alexiana75 chapter 1 . 11/4/2012
How sweet...I love young Estel fics!
Sadie Sil - English stories chapter 1 . 1/6/2012
Excelent descriptions! What a wonderful story. It is a good lesson to any writer and a good tale to any reader and LotR lovers.

Thanks for sharing it.

Sadie
Artemis Sherwood chapter 1 . 11/21/2011
SO SWEET! I can totally picture Elrond doing that! XD

Luv, Luv, Luv,

Artemis Sherwood
Cheerfully Blue chapter 1 . 10/1/2011
Awww... how sweet. It might have been done a millions times, but I really like this one. Great job.
TheRoadgoeseverOnAndOn chapter 1 . 2/11/2010
A great story. Very well written.
HelpfulPointers chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
This was a well written story, with plenty of description. On the whole, the dialogue was very good. However...

Do NOT use the word 'ok'. EVER. That is very much a modern term, it did not exist when Tolkien wrote the books and none of his characters used it. And coming from Elrond, it sounded especially odd. Elrond is old, very old, and very wise. His speech has a very graceful and curteous vocabulary. 'Ok' would certainly never fall from his lips.

Aside from that, good work. You have the potential to write very well, but you must first master the small things in order to produce something big.

Yours faithfully,

HP
LisaG16 chapter 1 . 12/12/2009
Very sweet images...nice little story-let.
Emily chapter 1 . 8/10/2009
A million times indeed... more like a JILLION.

But that's ok. : )

Good story, I liked it. Just the kind of thing that would really happen, poor Estel.
VeronicaD13 chapter 1 . 7/31/2009
This is such a cute and heartwarming story!