Reviews for Dharma's Haikus
Mislav chapter 1 . 6/9/2013
Well, that was a cute little poem. I like the part where they danced over test, it seemed cute and in character. Good that they got a baby after all.
Maybe you should try and make a story from this?
Evil Cosmic Triplets chapter 1 . 1/30/2013
I like how hope was steadily built up toward the tragic middle and how hope was rebuilt, bringing the series of poems full circle.
CraftyNotepad chapter 1 . 4/11/2010
The offered haikus are effective and informal, reflecting Dharma's balanced nature and abundant energy. Consider reformating the layout presented. Currently, despite the capitalized titles, each poems comes across as being smushed into its neighbors. If you use the ShiftReturn keys together at the end of the lines the space between them will be minimized. A full space could be utilized between poems, or characters could be added for that effect:

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Individual title would stand out easily with bold print and centering the poems would offer the thoughts in a traditional format accentuating their symmetry.

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CraftyNotepad