Reviews for Naruto: The Next God of Shinobi
ElementalMaster16 chapter 54 . 12/14
well this has been a joy to re-read! so glad i found this story again, i had completely forgotten about it :) it really is amazing. i think i'll be going straight for the sequel (_)
Guest chapter 7 . 10/1
R.I.P NARUTO
MonochromeTiger chapter 7 . 8/18
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!
Oh poor poor Naruto...
BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHHAAHHAAHAHAHAHAHHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAAHAHHAHA
MayaTrinitySky chapter 54 . 8/1
The story was fine, but I certainly expected better. The summary describes that Sandaime Hokage trains Naruto, but that to last only six small chapters! There was very little interaction between the two or the family of the latter.

The story would have deserved to be much more worked out, because the basic idea was really great. But you took your time on chapters that did not deserve it. For example: fighting during the exams, it was futile to play the length. Sakura would not have even deserved a sentence, against Témari she would not have been able to hold a second, it is the same for the fight of Ino and others.

But Naruto's training eventually would have deserved much more, there should have been a chapter on his family, his clan. But absolutely nothing!

As for the strength of Naruto, the latter learns a lot of technique, he has a foot in almost all categories and he can mysteriously control four elements at the age of 13 years. But finally, since you have created a much more powerful character in the person of Midoshi, his strength comes to be just above it. It would have been far more interesting for him to fall on his comrades. Since you have more or less followed the line of the manga, known enemies that could have beat easily and quickly without needing to use a large number of techniques. For the blow to each of his fights except for Sasuke, it was only a show of demonstration for his techniques. It is also a pity that in 54 chapters, the monkey appears three times. It is truly sad that you really did not take your time to create a real relationship with his adoptive family. In conclusion this story turns much more on the team of Anko than Naruto: The Next God of Shinobi. ( Traduction Google)

L’histoire était bien, mais je m’attendais certainement à mieux. Le résumé décrit que Sandaime Hokage entraine Naruto, mais cela à durer uniquement six petits chapitres ! Il n’y a eu que très peu d’interaction entre les deux ou avec la famille de ce dernier.

L’histoire aurait mérité d’être beaucoup plus travaillée, car l’idée de base était vraiment super. Mais vous avez pris votre temps sur des chapitres qui ne le méritait pas. Par exemple : les combats durant les examens, il était futile de jouer la longueur. Sakura n’aurait même pas mérité une phrase, contre Témari elle n’aurait pas pu tenir une seconde, il en est de même pour le combat de Ino et d’autres.

Mais l’entrainement de Naruto par la suite aurait certainement mérité bien plus, il y aurait dû y avoir un chapitre sur sa famille, son clan. Mais absolument rien !

Pour ce qui est de la force de Naruto, ce dernier apprend pas mal de technique, il a un pied dans presque toutes les catégories et il peut mystérieusement contrôler quatre éléments à l’âge de 13 ans. Mais finalement, puisque vous avez créé un personnage beaucoup plus puissant en la personne de Midoshi, sa force passe pour être juste au-dessus. Il aurait été bien plus intéressant qu’il tombe sur ses camarades. Puisque vous avez plus ou moins suivi la ligne du manga, des ennemies connues qu’il aurait pu battent facilement et rapidement sans avoir besoin d’utiliser un grand nombre de techniques. Car pour le coup à chacun de ses combats à l’exception de Sasuke, ce ne fut qu’un spectacle de démonstration pour ses techniques. Il est également dommage que sur 54 chapitres, le singe apparaisse trois fois. Il est vraiment triste que vous n’ayez vraiment pas prit votre temps de créer une véritable relation avec sa famille d’adoption. En conclusion cette histoire tourne bien plus sur l'équipe de Anko que sur Naruto: The Next Dieu de Shinobi.
Random Werdio chapter 11 . 7/11
Dang I really hope Midoshi dies like how in Team 7's first C mission. I don't know why but this Midoshi character just ugh I don't like her. Great story by the way.
ShadowSnake22 chapter 54 . 6/30
this was a very good story andvery interestingplz continue it
Guest chapter 44 . 6/22
I noticed the technique, it was from that girl Flare from fairy tail. Isn't she sorta crazy?
Guest chapter 2 . 6/13
Shitty english is shitty
CarlaBee313 chapter 1 . 5/23
I felt you could use a beta. The conversations were sometimes too straight to the point and lacked emotions...but the plot was good and I felt as if this should have been the real cannon plot...
GodAlvirus chapter 3 . 4/7
Ki Nobori no Shugyotree climbing exercise? Can someone answer that cause I don't know...
masta oof chapter 17 . 3/13
Why did naruto get the toads and the monkey?
Anime Princess chapter 54 . 2/9
Wow, this was VERY powerful and action packed. I LOVE how Sarutobi-senses taught Naruto!
Jose19 chapter 20 . 2/5
Naruto can't have the Snake Summons because the Snakes are the natural enemies of the Toads they simply hate each other.
Jose19 chapter 18 . 2/5
I actually want to see if there is a pairing for Naruto in this story because he does eventually settle down, and has children with a certain Hyuga girl.
Anime Princess chapter 22 . 2/2
When will you explain who the hell Midoshi is?! And how will Sasuke, Sakura, and Naruto join forces if they aren't Team 7?
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