Reviews for A Twist in Time
Guest chapter 31 . 4/21
Wow great story
PERCYxANNABETH chapter 26 . 4/2
Heck ! I just wanna kil u it would have been fine wid just a kiss rather than SEX! Gods i wanna kill u N where iz percy u explain every on but him what iz he invisible 2 evryone or what?
josh01264 chapter 15 . 9/3/2016
a bunch of Mary and Gary sues?
josh01264 chapter 13 . 9/3/2016
Godly parents wrong, teens acting like five year olds...
josh01264 chapter 1 . 9/3/2016
for a while there I thought they named there child Annabeth also ugh
Guest chapter 3 . 4/24/2016
LOL! The old PJO Candice are so funny!
Guest chapter 28 . 2/3/2016
Love DJ
Guest chapter 17 . 2/3/2016
Love the idea but you totally should've had annabeth name the helmet "from my beloveds" in ancient Greek
Guest chapter 7 . 2/3/2016
Straight it's spelled straight
Guest chapter 4 . 2/3/2016
Clothes it's spelled clothes
Brunovella1607 chapter 31 . 12/20/2015
You should write a fan fiction about kiley and dating life, marriage, and family together. You are really good at fanfictions and I think that would be perfect!
Brunovella1607 chapter 31 . 11/16/2015
That was really really awesome! I hope that you write another one about what happens when Brennion and Kiley get married and they have a family and grow up!
Bella2 chapter 5 . 5/12/2015
Just for the record Katie is actually a daughter of Demeter
weeTxox chapter 5 . 3/16/2015
I'm not trying to be evil or anything cause I love this story I just wanna let you know that you said 'a son of Hermes is dating a daughter of Aphrodite' and actually Katie Gardener is a daughter of Demeter not Aphrodite
That random girl chapter 20 . 2/15/2015
Ok. Your stories are sooooo unbelievably good! I love them all! INFACT im re-reading this one then the sequel again right now. After and if you finish the sequel to this, you should do a story about them ( Kiley, Erin, Brennion, Nate, etc.) after they go through the time portal thing and what life is like after going to the future. You could also add that the reason they all remember is because the gods have them another power and it was that they remembered what happened when they went into the future. But the story could be about like them getting married and having kids and stuff. Your stories are amazing! You are such a great author!
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