Reviews for Eddie
RustyPete12 chapter 2 . 7/31/2011
This story really speaks to me. I look forward to seeing the next chapter.
Fanatick chapter 2 . 3/14/2011
This is a good story. I like your writing style! I really don't see any errors in your writing, so. . . . .THIS IS AN AWESOME STORY AND I WANT MORE! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
Rhonda Petrie chapter 2 . 10/3/2010
This is really good; I hope you can continue this; however, you should try fixing up your sentence structure because they look pretty disorganized and fragmented.
Disneychic01 chapter 2 . 1/14/2010
This is pretty good, but it would be better if you didn't put all those side notes in. It takes away from the story besides that good job.