|Reviews for Vanilla and Chrome|
| Rosie chapter 1 . 5/27
| dpennell007 chapter 1 . 3/8
Even though this story could have been expanded, I like it as written. It left me feeling melancholy, then grateful once these two lonely hearts found each other. Excellent work.
| Oldiebutgoodie chapter 1 . 12/19/2017
I really wish this would be so much more than a one shot. This is beautifully erotic and haunting.
| Lafemmevegeta chapter 1 . 9/17/2017
Hi! I really hope your readers talked you into continuing this story. It seems like the perfect mix of dark, sex, and the need to start over with someone you can call family. Loved this shot though!
| twirob chapter 1 . 10/17/2016
AWESOME! and mysterious o/s i do hope you carry this on thanks for sharing ;D
| ChristyWIX chapter 1 . 7/21/2016
This one was really rather poetic. I really liked it. I found it sad and definitely open ended as you mentioned, and it probably is best to leave it as such. Unless, you bring them both the happiness they clearly haven't had for a very long time. Which, from the way they've begun. I think they may have found just that in each other.
| Twinerd1 chapter 1 . 2/20/2016
| BB Masen-Cullen chapter 1 . 4/13/2015
I really hope that it'll become something longer! Even if it's just a few chapters! I loved it! It hooked me in right from the start! Can't wait to see if there's more!
| NebulaRaven chapter 1 . 8/26/2014
At first this story seemed like a typical dirty, horny one shot. But it was so much more as it unravels.
I loved how first they were desperate to feel connected to each other because even without knowing, they were two lost souls trying to find each other. And when they did they did find a home in each other.
Sometimes the best stories don't have to have to thorough with details, they just have to be told with meaning and passion. There deep connection and automatic acceptance of each other made me grin with joy.
Truly beautiful story.
| Eli42 chapter 1 . 8/6/2014
This was so sweet. It was one of those fics that, while I am rather desperate to read more, I can accept and appreciate the ending you gave. Loved it!
| Halo221 chapter 1 . 2/14/2014
I definitely enjoyed this one shot! It's so hard because I do love the ambiguity, but I'd also love for you to continue it, lol
| meelee72 chapter 1 . 1/10/2014
Wow, I really loved that.
& I loved that we didn't find out their secret pain.- They'll know in time.
They're bond & feelings toward one another are enough.
- That was really beautiful.
| geosordino chapter 1 . 12/8/2013
Just found this today - think it's beautiful that, as you say, they forgive each other unconditionally. I'd love to see this become more...don't know if you still have any desire to continue it, but I'd read it. Thanks for sharing.
| flutterfli chapter 1 . 10/19/2013
Would love to see you expand on this. Two very broken individuals crying out for each other.
| NKubie chapter 1 . 9/2/2013
Obviously you never continued with this story, but I for one would read it if you ever do.
I hadn't read this story or yours yet, but when I saw it on TLS to get ready for this year's contest, I knew I had to take a peek. So glad I did.
These poor lost souls have now found a home. That feels good!