|Reviews for Past Sins|
| bree tennyson chapter 1 . 5/6/2010
y is gwen so worried about kevin? and will kevin calm down? i need to know so update soon
| ledah13 chapter 1 . 2/21/2010
it's really a pity
i was REALLY looking forward to an update at this
am still waiting though
i also imagined something like this and it always ends up in Ben being mean to Kevin i hate it
also, you can't remove jokes, watching Ben 10 and AF tells me that even in the most serious matters, they throw jokes
btw i love your jokes, it feels not corny but appropriate
| AM83220 chapter 1 . 10/6/2009
Intriguing idea; I look forward to seeing your execution of it.
| Abra Cadaverous chapter 1 . 8/1/2009
This is pretty interesting. I can't wait for the next chapter.
| Fairy of the Flames chapter 1 . 8/1/2009
Yay for Kevin's awesome electricity powers!
To be honest, I hate angsty stories. I'm glad this is an adventure tale instead.
Argit! I love it when Argit is around and in character!
Thanks for this interesting start.
| Twilight Phantom Dragon chapter 1 . 7/31/2009
It's great to see so many updates from you in one day! So far this story has captured my attention. I agree that Kevin turning back into a monster is a very common story. Hey, maybe display the cliche in your other story, ... Anyway, I'm getting off-topic. You're doing a wonderful job! The characterization is good and the fact that you're using Kevin's old powers without the alien form is great! I'm going to enjoy seeing how things play out. Update as soon as possible.