Reviews for One Loaf
the lone sailor chapter 1 . 1/26/2011
oh most noble writer, i do love a good story.

HA! it was gteat but i couldnt keep up the facade i am a navey brat and i enjoy a good dockside story , now at the knell of a shipmen's bell you will see saint elmos fire.
monkeymouse chapter 1 . 8/2/2009
good story! it had a lot of rich characters, and Ben and Ned were very in character.
Castaway5 chapter 1 . 7/31/2009
Very Good! I like this a lot! I can see Ben stealing, and not liking it and Ned was perfect! I hope you'll be doing one every month! (And maybe consider writing a longer one. ;) )