|Reviews for Somewhat of an Analogy|
| Polly Little chapter 1 . 3/25/2016
Do you know how hard it is to find Juniper x Grover? Let alone good fluff like this.
| KarismaticKoala chapter 1 . 9/9/2015
Beautifully messy is what comes to mind when i read this. There are some minor errors that i think you didn't mean to make;
- point 3, paragraph 3. "your nimble feet that's spent" - that have not that is would be more appropriate
- point 4, paragraph 9 (yes, i do count one-liners as paragraphs haha sorry). "It smelt nice." You're writing in the present tense; try not to switch around.
- Okay, so this isn't a specific observation; but rather, or so i think, you can continue after quotations... Well, it's a little hard to explain. You wrote: "...Seaweed Brain," Her muffled voice wafts up. "that you are ..."
Beyond simply typos (i hope), i think you should write it thus:
"...Seaweed Brain," her muffled voice wafts up, "that you are..."
"... Seaweed Brain," her muffled voice wafts up; "that you are..."
And yes, capitals as i typed them as well
- not sure what line, but part 4; "And if you ever make like the gods do"
I think you meant mate, not make?
| Yikai chapter 1 . 10/23/2012
I'm in love with you.
| WhimsicallyAwkward chapter 1 . 8/27/2012
Very cute :)
| Allie chapter 1 . 5/1/2010
please please please write more I loved both of your stories about PJO. Nothing could have made them better!
| strauberry23 chapter 1 . 2/2/2010
Write more please!
| deletewavedelete chapter 1 . 1/1/2010
Aw, that was sweet :) I might get an idea from this for another one-shot... thanks. ;)
Perfectly ended, all of them. :o Very nice, I love it! :D
| Adonai63 chapter 1 . 10/21/2009
Aww... That was cute and sweet.
| believeinthegods chapter 1 . 8/13/2009
How did I not find this before? It's just beautiful...just gorgeous - well written, wonderful storyline and (it seems odd to say this) great layout, that really works in the story, y'know? It was just amazing...I loved it. Really.
| aesthetic promises chapter 1 . 8/1/2009
I LOVED it!
| September Sorrows chapter 1 . 8/1/2009
I absolutely love it. Grover and Juniper and Silena and Beckendorf just don't get enough attention, do they?
Anyways, I absolutely loved all of them. At some parts, I had a little bit of a hard time following (in the Silena/Beckendorf part, the line breaks confused me a bit), but it was cute nonetheless!
| breezered chapter 1 . 8/1/2009
This was amazing! I love it!