Reviews for Reposition
Tiva4evaxxx chapter 9 . 4/2/2010
*has finished chapter and the Rep withdrawal symptons have started already*

Oh dear. Today is not going to be pleasant. Damn you and finishing your fics! *glares evilly* I hate you! Okay, so i don't. But seriously, i can't believe it's over. Meh.










Okay, that's like, the review for the ending. Because. Seriously. SERIOUSLY.


I read Hay's review, and i'm annoyed. Because i want bullet points now, but i don't know how to get them. It's really not very fair! *glares at hayley* I want bullet points.

Sorry, slightly off topic. I again blame the fact i'm hyper. Hehehehehe. :P My mood was slightly dampened by your incredibly depressing/angsty endey chapter thingy. But seriously :O

That's like, my review.


I love this!

I can't believe it's over :'(



Can't you just sort of continue it...? Okay i'm going to stop being silly now.


I love this fic!

You're amazing.

You have to start another multi chap soon, or i WILL have hannah writing withdrawal syptoms. And that would be bad. Then i'd get annoying. Even more annoying than i already am. I know, there's no need to be shocked, i can get more annoying.

I'm going to shut up now.

Love this. Sad it's over, but brilliantly fantastic ending which i hate you for. :P

Love you!

Tiva4evaxxx chapter 8 . 4/2/2010
I said i'd get to it *looks around guiltily*

Anyway. Here i am. Bloody finally, i had NO idea how many reviews i had to catch up on :O

Btw, love the title of the chapter ;P

You know what reading this reminded me of? The fact that it's Doctor Who on Saturday :O Talk about *excitement* anyway, you know what *that* reminded me of? The fact it's the mentalist tonight! :O Talk about more *excitement* So to give you a clear picture, i'd read the first couple of lines, thought 'IT'S ALICE' then remembered said things, and already i'm extremely excited. Plus the fact i'm excited about getting round to this (finally) and reading the end. That's a lot of excitement. Especially this early in the morning.

I apologize for my rambling. It's quite rambly. I think it's the early hour... but i can't be sure. Meh. Anyway. Onto the chapter! That was brilliant, and i really hate you quite a lot for being able to write this well and come up with all this stuff. The ending :O You made me all teary *cries* But still, so good, i love it. ONTO THE NEXT CHAPTER! I'm really hyper for some reason. What's wrong with me? Actually, don't answer tha OMFG when do you go away? I just realized you're going away *panics* When are you going? :O Oh, i'm annoyed at Jack for running away again. I swear he always does that. It's not very good you know. I feel quite deprived of a happy ending, but it was amazing writing so i guess you're forgiven. Just. Nearly. Anyway!


Love you

(sorry i'm really hyper)

thank you thank you chapter 9 . 3/21/2010
thank you thank you

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thank you thank you

thank you thank you

thank you thank you

thank you thank you

thank you thank you

for posting this fic,

no matter how terribly

sad it was. I loved it.
Ab55556 chapter 9 . 3/17/2010
I already feel deprived.

Seriously, no jokes. I feel deprived.

I want to watch Doctor Who.


Thats something I haven't said since I was about nine.


By the way, thanks for the dedication.

Anyway, back to the chapter :'(

I will also briefly credit you for you helpful little explanation there, it was good, thanks :)

The ending, THE ENDING!

Oh the ending!

It was so depressing, yet so, kind of weirdly beautiful, like the bit about the Swan Song, and the incredible intense speech at the end.

Oh Hannah, thank you so much for posting, I really will love you forever and eternally if you do post your next fic, just SOON ok, its taken you way too long to UD this, although I feel very depressed now its over, its all over.

But don't worry, I am consoling myself with the fact that as I have witnessed your writing progress and change throughout this fic, I already know, I just KNOW that your next one will be, well, better, and thats a very weird thing for me to say.

Because lets be honest, you don't get much better than this. No one does. Even you :)

But thanks for the incredible rollercoaster rie of emotions I have enjoyed in this fic, I have loved it from start to finish.

I take immense pride and ease in saying it is without a doubt the best Doctor Who/Torchwood fic I have ever read. Better that a real episode!

I love you Hannah, thank you so much :')

Ab55556 chapter 8 . 3/17/2010
Ok, I won't bother to put this review in any kind of order, sinmply because I'm too excited.

As in, literally bouncing up and down, jiggling the damn laptop!

Well, what can I say, the first line, BAM!

Sucks you straight in, immediately got me excited.

There are so many emotions in this its like...unwordable.

Hmm, shame that the only word I can think of to describe it properly isn't actually a word.

So the end of the Torchwood? :(

Well, at least you can say it went out with a bang.

And an emotional bang at that. It was like, wow...

The whole chapter, I mean seriously...

And the quick changes of scene!

They only added to the drama, the excitement!

Ok, yes, I am being very dramatic, but this isn't any old chapter of any old fic, this is REP for crying out loud, and the second from last chapter! :'(

All the speech too! I shouldn't even get started on that, it was like :O :O :O :O

SO damn good! All the perfect characterisation, all the hard work that must have gone into this...


Ok, now I'm excited, like REALLY excited!

To read the next chapter, which I will already be doing by the time you are reading this review, NOW!

Sorry for the crap review, its hard to put into words, it really is...well, something.

You know what I mean :P


ForestSprite chapter 9 . 3/17/2010
Is it okay with me to be mad at your Jack? That he went to all the trouble to bring Ianto back and still couldn't find it in himself to stick around.

I do really love the fact though that the Doctor wasn't able to fix everything and prevent the sacrifice of the boy, it was good because he's not perfect and it shows. Good story... but I still want to smack Jack for both how he acted at the end of COE and your story.
enigma-kar chapter 9 . 3/16/2010
Wow - loved this ending. It wasn't the happy Janto ending I had hoped for (and was kinda expecting), but I still really loved this and know why you wrote it this way. Besides, sometimes the sadder endings are the best :P. The ending was perfect with Rhys giving the Doctor the disc. And then relating it back to what happened in the Water's Of Mars. Very well done.

Great little nod there to Harry Sullivan from the classic series, too. :)

Sad to see this end, but thank you for the great read. i have enjoyed every bit of it. And I'm looking forward to your new Doctor Who fic with the 11th Doctor. :)

Kar, xx
OutCold chapter 9 . 3/16/2010
Ahh, I love being credited. S’okay, deal with Em’s reviews, I only ask that you skim-read my stuff, and I think (?) you’ve done that.

“replace and reposition”, “replace and reposition”, I love that. Brilliant. Replacing and reposition rolls really oh, something.

Ahh, Waters of Mars sounds horrible. Horribley horrible mad Docster. Or Time Lord Victorious, if you prefer. I quite like Docster.

Brooke sounds really really cool though.

And oh, the angst. *wails*


•Who cares about the dialogue not being yours? You are a master transcriptor, and your paragraph-ey bits just rock.

•I love this fic to bits.

•And on rolls the FF world.


Wow, bullet points in reviews.
OutCold chapter 8 . 3/16/2010
Ahh, the wonders of TWW. The emotions it can rise in you. And then, you know, the way it just kills you.

The shed… could you get a more dismal set if you tried? Don’t answer.

Ahh, sorkin, the Stephen POV is so sad. :’( I hate you. Stupid Stephen killing Jack and stupid Stephen killing… ok, going to stop ranting now.

“having some trouble keeping up with the man who had a good eight hundred years of experience in the art on him”

Rather than “failing miserably at beating the nine hundred year old guy”? :P

“his eyes remained steely and layered beneath the sad soft tone was a threat.” That’s an awesome line, Hannahkins. I love Doctor. You don’t write him OOC. Liar.

Bah. “didn’t matter who had given the order” Bah, is all I say.

Ahh! Coffee addiction. Go Ianto. :P

Running Jack. Always running. Going to kill him for running. Now feeling like going and re-reading Celle’s fic about hitting him with a bedpole in his… sensitive parts.

Just going to read on. HAPPY NOW?

rawriloveyou chapter 7 . 2/16/2010
Great so far! Can't wait for more!
Tiva4evaxxx chapter 7 . 2/10/2010
So, beebs, i loved this chapter :P

Hahahaha. Alice :P

OMG! I know the doctor! *sings in chanting tone*

*I know the doctor*

*I know the doctor*


DD Sorry it's taken me a while to get round to this. Stupid other people. Who stupidly UD. And stupid teachers, who find it fun to watch is suffer... anyway. Off topic.

I LOVE THE LONGNESS! You're making me feel guilty... i should UD BW... i should UD ROL... i should UD a lot of things. Anyway. Hush me. I loved it! It was amazing *dies* Ahh. Awesomeness!

Love you! UD soon!

enigma-kar chapter 7 . 2/9/2010
Yay for an update and for a long one, too. :)

Really loved this chapter, again everyone is written perfectly. I particularly loved the small scene with Ianto and the Doctor - they are both so in character it's brilliant. :P

Can't wait for the update. I really hope the Doctor can intervene so Jack won't have to sacrifice Steven. That part always makes me tear up.

Thanks again for the update and great read,

Kar, xx
Village-Mystic chapter 7 . 2/9/2010
But if it worked on Clem, it can work through an adult, right?
Village-Mystic chapter 4 . 2/9/2010
The Ianto scene was great, including the dialog, but remember for it to make sense it would have to be weeks in the future. Otherwise, no digging of bodies just stacking them for the government medical examiner team.
Village-Mystic chapter 3 . 2/9/2010
Good narration of the John F. part. Everything else is okay.
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