|Reviews for Tales of The Fragile Human Heart|
| NativeMoon95 chapter 11 . 9/30/2010
| acw1 chapter 10 . 9/14/2009
i hope he goes back soon she is probably going to be catatonic if he doesn't.
| acw1 chapter 8 . 9/7/2009
| rickiebeaumont chapter 7 . 8/24/2009
] nice to see APOV
| acw1 chapter 7 . 8/24/2009
everyone is miserable. Hope it starts to get better eventually.
| linnfromia chapter 5 . 8/18/2009
All your short chapters setting up the different personalities are so well done! The Bella one in particular is beautifully written. And I enjoyed Esme's thoughts - a character onerarely gets to hear from. You did a really nice job setting the stage here and I look forward to finding out where you take this.
| luvmesomejasper chapter 6 . 8/15/2009
everyone is suffering huh? lol
| acw1 chapter 5 . 8/10/2009
perhaps they can help each other.
| NCChris chapter 4 . 8/5/2009
I really like this and I imagine this is probably pretty much how they all felt...
I'm interested to see what comes next...
| acw1 chapter 4 . 8/4/2009
great so far. looking forward to more.
| firstsong1 chapter 3 . 8/4/2009
Great start! Congrats on your first story...I know how scary it can be to put yourself out there. So far I really like it and am enjoying your view on things. I am wondering if your chapters will get longer or if they will stay short? I'm just curious but either way look forward to seeing where you take this.
| Britt-a-water chapter 3 . 8/1/2009
Edwards pain is his own making. I can't feel bad for him, he is hurting to many people with his stubborness and unwillingness to change Bella or accept that she can make her own choices. Still good perspective here!
| Britt-a-water chapter 2 . 8/1/2009
Edward is gone.
I liked the repetativeness of that line throughout this chapter. This was hauntingly sad!
| Britt-a-water chapter 1 . 8/1/2009
I feel so bad for Bella! That was so sad.
I can't feel bad for Edwards pain even if he thinks he is doing it for the right reasons, nobody would be able to hear someone they love in that kind of pain and walk away.