Reviews for So Wrong, It's Right
weasleyjumper chapter 7 . 12/30/2012
'AMAZING! I can't wait for more!
miley-o123 chapter 7 . 8/18/2010
I love your story! can't wait to read what happens next :)
HonieeBee chapter 7 . 8/18/2010
Whooah i did not see that cat fight coming! Update soon i really like this story :D
nyla chapter 7 . 8/8/2010
ohmygod, you are amazing! i can't wait for more, you are totally awesome! keep it coming!
HarryPotter-vs.-Twilight chapter 7 . 7/31/2010
what? what what? oh please write more!
RedheadObsession chapter 7 . 7/27/2010
Love it!
angelayu chapter 3 . 7/18/2010
I love how your writing is like...more real. It's the best one I've seen. Mostly, whenever I se scrose fanfiction, it's always on the train or something. This is creative and really realistic. I love it (:
xxx-angelin-xxx chapter 7 . 7/18/2010
This was great! I can't wait for the next chapter! Selena coming was quite a surprise but it made the chapter even more interesting;)
P.o.T.t.Y.F.a.N.x chapter 7 . 7/16/2010
And Selene's back. Like you said. Haha, a physco!

:( and she interupted, damn it!

Haha, laughed when Anabel was in the doorway :)

Keep going, still loving it!
theSunlitEarth chapter 3 . 7/14/2010
Okay, so it's pretty decent so far, I just have a few suggestions about the writing. First of all, comma placement. Some sentences have commas where you should really start a new sentence. "He had never told anyone before, but the Sorting Hat didn't want to put him in Slytherin, it had actually wanted to put him in Gryffindor, but Scorpius flat out refused to be put into that rival house of his father's." This is a really long sentence. Break it up so it flows better. Try, "He had never told anyone before, but the Sorting Hat hadn't wanted to put him in Slytherin, it had actually wanted to put him in Gryffindor. However, Scorpius had flat out refused to be put into the house that had rivaled his fathers." Understand?

Another thing is just general sentence structure. "He looked at his watch, it said 1:35 pm." This sentence in particular bothered me. Try something along the lines of "He looked at his watch. The time read 1:35 pm." Just add something more, you know? I hope I'm making sense. It just needs some polishing. Some of the sentences in the previous chapters just didn't make sense, and I had to read them several times to get them, mostly because they needed a comma or there was a word missing or something. Stuff like that. Really easy mistakes to fix. Anyway, hope that helped :)
P.o.T.t.Y.F.a.N.x chapter 6 . 7/11/2010
Oooooh Goody! I'm glad taht Selene's out of the way! I love this story:) excited for the next chapterr!
Draco-Hermy chapter 5 . 4/25/2010
Will you update more? I realize that it's a little late but... it isn't FINISHED right?
Stefany Sungold chapter 5 . 4/13/2010
Purely exquisite...I hink I used the word right lol WHat can I say other than updateupdateupdate! As soon as Possible!
Selenehekate chapter 5 . 3/13/2010
Adorable! You should update!
Selenehekate chapter 3 . 3/13/2010
Yes! Love this song! Awesome job!
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