|Reviews for Kismet and Kindred Spirits|
| cinnyshy chapter 5 . 8/13/2009
I hope to hell that he calls her, before he starts school. That way she knows that hes coming back. I think that it's great that she found someone to help her pass the time til he shows up again. I can't wait for her reaction when he calls her. I think it will also, be good for them to let each other know what has happend in the last 2yrs that they've been apart. It'll help with the whole healing process of both of them.
| Leah chapter 4 . 8/12/2009
Omg they always just missed each other!
This is so good, i love this story!
keep up the good work.
| Leah chapter 3 . 8/12/2009
Im liking the story:)
| M Wilridge chapter 4 . 8/10/2009
In the beginning there was awesomeness.. And then god said let there be more.. and sure enough this chapter does exactly that! Man I can't believe how crazy Edward is.. So this crutch of his underground fighting arena days.. Im guessing that's what that was, is also HIS experimentation into the same sex relationship.. Man I would be lying if I said I was completely comfortable with the scene.. Im not throwing daggers at the guys but the grinding definitely made me look away.. But that didn't take away from the greatness of the chapter at all! You had James talking about Esme first wanting him and then looking good! I couldn't believe it was going on it was so awesome! The flash back scenes were very well laid out and I really enjoyed the way you had the characters almost see each other on many different occasions... It actually reminded me of the scene on TT where the twins and boys see each other for the first time.. two weeks before they go to school was a nice way to buy a little time and delve more into the characters.. I like that.. I can't wait for them to meet each other.. Two weeks does give Victoria enough time to steal her heart away too! So that's going to make for some serious drama! As always a very well rounded chapter.. It was super long but didn't have any filler at all.. Keep up the good work and thank you for not having the Brokeback Twilight scene...lol..
M the Eternal Raven FanBoy..
| tracyann2007 chapter 4 . 8/10/2009
I can't wait for you to put another chapter up. Don't take to long! I can't wait for Bella and Edward to reunite and see what happens.
| dementedevilpixie chapter 4 . 8/10/2009
Hey, I loved the James and Edward interaction in this chapter. Fucking awesome work!
| Leah chapter 1 . 8/9/2009
im liking this new story a lot!
it's so sad already, but soo good:)
| nikki chapter 1 . 8/6/2009
i loved it i want another chapter. the only problem i found was the beginning started to fast i was confused a little. very awesome missy
| ochalke5 chapter 3 . 8/5/2009
It's a very interesting story, i can't wait to see where you take it. Please update soon.
| Princess Briar Rose chapter 3 . 8/5/2009
raven, i dont know how you always do it, but you do... this is amazing... i really love reading your stuff... i noticed a few grammar and spelling errors, but nothing major... mostly i just noticed awesome :P love you!
| M Wilridge chapter 3 . 8/5/2009
Ok Raven.. I was trying to be calm.. I was trying to be the person that everyone would understand as I went through this but I can't.. I have to say it like this... It was completely and utterly Awesome! The Girl on girl action was the most... Exciting.. thing I've read in ages! I couldn't believe the.. feelings.. running through me as I was reading it.. I'm with Emmett! I just want to watch! Man and did I have the visual! The fucking scene was perfectly mapped out and detailed. I knew exactly what was going on at every moment like I was watching it on the big screen.. or better yet on the computer screen in a small window to the side of all the other ones with the mouse cursor on the X ready to close it if anyone came in! Man it was awesome.. In the words of William Wallace, I'm not finished! The almost rape scene in the bathroom was another vivid moment.. There was a tad bit of a typo in that he started as Felix and turned into Demetri.. But only a real Raven Fanboy would notice such a thing on a 150 words chapter...lol.. Emmett and Rosalie were introduced perfectly into the crew. Rosalie wasn't pulling out any stops with her little play along.. That was.. Exciting also.. Just hearing about Bella and her humidity..lol. The racist throw in was awesome.. Especially with Tanya.. The ending scene with them at the coffee shop.. Man.. that was to die for.. It was like the rest of this.. perfectly written.. I love how all of these characters are coming out.. that's the best part of a fan fic is you don't really have to character develop.. we already know somewhat what these characters are about.. Like in an original work I would say all of these characters are introduced too fast but this is like making a sequel.. But to nothing.. It’s awesome.. that’s bottom line.. This Story equals awesome.. I know I’m going to be a little disappointed having to skim through a portion of it when the boys are playing hide the baloney together but like I told you a million reviews ago.. It’s not about writing what the readers want to hear.. It’s about writing your story and hoping it keeps them reading.. And even though I hated the fact that Bella kissed Jacob I still read on.. So attachment made.. Success.. I can’t wait to read the next installment.. Good work Raven.. Keep it up.
Raven Fanboy M
| Angelides chapter 3 . 8/5/2009
this is truly something else
lmfao at the Harry Potter reference, that was fucking hilarious! i almost fell off the bed laughing!
and the Twilight one awesome as well... hehe i know a lot of people who probably would wear yellow contacts and smother themselves in body glitter so that they could get some lol :L
the pairings in this are awesome as well... love how Quil and Embry are gay :)
and moving onto Bella ... does this mean she's bi? or is she a lesbian who's in love with Edward? or is she maybe just using women so that she doesn't have another guy until Edward's back on the scene? or maybe not any of those?
the lemony goodness was perfect as per usual too... love it all!
happy writing :)
and THANK YOU for updating as regularly as you do
i know a lot of people take it for granted and don't realise how much work it must take for you to update as often but when i check my emails the next day and see that you've updated it really makes me smile! :D
| mystical rabbit chapter 1 . 8/5/2009
i mean this when i say that i love you and that your a great writer and i dont care who see's this i mean it with all my heart and soul never stop being who you are and i will never stop loving you
| M Wilridge chapter 2 . 8/5/2009
Ok so some funnies that come to mind right away.. Seth as her dog...lol.. I was dying... And then the match up with the Quileute boys..HA! that was perfect.. I remember telling someone why doesn't Jacob go for someone else like Leah or... Embry..lol.. That's hilarious.. So I like the start of this story.. It's not like most of the Alternate reality FanFics of Twilight.. It actually starts with them on more of New Moon then Twilight.. and I'm guessing that it doesn't matter because you are probably going to throw stuff from all of them together.. You have me a little on edge though...lol.. With the Bronze hair kid holding some other guys hand.. I mean I don't have a problem with people that go.. that way.. but Edward? That would blow my mind.. I wouldn't know what I was reading.. Like a Twilight/Chasing Amy/To Kill a Mockingbird... Don't know where To Kill a Mockingbird fits in.. but that popped in my head.. Stupid Head poppermajigger.. Anyways.. And what the hell was Bella talking about when she was looking at Rosalie? SHE'S going to be the girl on girl action that you promised me? lol.. Sorry.. It's a habit to say people promised things.. Even if they said they would think about trying.. it's a promise...lol.. And now the hard part of my day.. trying to figure out how to read almost 150 words while playing Mommy..lol.. I will try my hardest to have your review up shortly!
Raven FanBoy.. M
| dementedevilpixie chapter 3 . 8/5/2009
I enjoyed that chapter. The whole Harry Potter bit has given me something to laugh about. lol. Great work!