|Reviews for Kismet and Kindred Spirits|
| hi i'm asstard chapter 1 . 8/5/2009
umm i have a ? is this story based off of twilight?me and my boyfriend have a bet going and if it is than i win
| M Wilridge chapter 1 . 8/5/2009
So the prodical son has returned.. I have found some time to spend reading over your new creation.. I guess this one is a freebie since I already read it.. But I wanted to make sure you had a review for this.. I just wanted to note that in reading your notations I see that it says you have some same sex pairings.. well.. It's a good thing that I don't have a Homophobic bone in my body.. I must say though that if there is any Lemon/SSP then I might skim.. Nothing against peoples choices.. I just don't want the visual of it.. Anyways.. So about this chapter.. Very nicely crafted I am definitely seeing a lot of the Twilight Twins Characteristics which I love.. You could totally change the names and make this your own story.. I know I know you don't want to do that..lol.. I will always push you to reach out.. I can't help it Raven..
Speaking of reaching out.. ONLY RAVEN COULD PUT A LEMONY SCENE IN A PROLOGUE! It's one of a kind.. you should call this story lemon in Prologue.. I guarantee a million clicks..lol.. But that's what I love about your writing.. It's no holds barred.. This father taking him away thing sounds really interesting.. I am definitely wondering where you are going with this story.. Well on to the next chapter.. It seems I have a lot to read today.. did that really just say 14,391...LOL.. That's so Raven.. Sorry.. I know not clever at all...lol..
Raven FanBoy M
| PrincessPeanutButtercup chapter 2 . 8/5/2009
I loved the blow up doll part and Pinky and the Brain. I used to love that show. "I like pencils that taste like bacon." Anyway, another wonderful Chapter, I can't wait to see what Edward is up to.
| PrincessPeanutButtercup chapter 1 . 8/5/2009
Oh wow, poor Bella. I really loved chapter 1. Great work.
| ochalke5 chapter 2 . 8/4/2009
Another amazing chapter. Please update soon.
| your mystic chapter 1 . 8/3/2009
i fucking love your story plz tell me that edward and jay are lovers and bella and vic are too PLZ WRITE MORE YOUR FUCKING GREAT! I LOVE YOU VERY MUCH MY LOVE!
| Princess Briar Rose chapter 2 . 8/3/2009
love you raven! i can just feel that this one is going to be fantastic... lose points for bringing pattinson into it, but gain many many more for making seth a puppy :P lol
| athena-apollo chapter 1 . 8/3/2009
Ok so you have offically drawn me in. This story looks like it's going to be different, very good and different. Im loving what I see so far and I can't wait to read the rest.
| Angelides chapter 2 . 8/3/2009
damn, i was hoping that the weird feeling she was getting was due to Edward returning but i guess it works out better this way :)
lol i only realised that Seth is a dog when you mentioned that he was going to be 'let out' and taken for a walk down to the beach / im such a tard, but it provides a nice change from the role of characters that are included
the way you've included most original characters already is definitely a good thing :)
i reckon new characters would be more difficult to relate to, and seeing as we know some things about SM's characters, even though they may be different in your work, our minds aren't struggling to figure out what this new person's like etc.
gonna try my hardest to review every chapter :)
keep up the good work!
P.S. we heart your stories just as much as the characters of Twilight, it gives everybody a chance to escape the confines of one storyline, and i love wondering how this particular story is gonna work out D
| Raven Jadewolfe chapter 1 . 8/3/2009
If anyone is reading the reviews, I hope you enjoyed the Prologue!
| Angelides chapter 1 . 8/3/2009
i love love love it!
interesting storyline and the lemon was perfect
just as awkward as the real thing is at first
i think it adds a nice touch to the story, like a reminder to her of what he was like before he has to leave her
sweet yet heartbreaking at the same time
and the references to the lion and the lamb parts were nicely used as well )
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE continue with the story :)
i think im addicted already D
| Leelan Oleander chapter 1 . 8/2/2009
Please? Please will you continue with it? I need to know more. Please?
| xmyidolx chapter 1 . 8/2/2009
OMGOSH! i love this story! i want to see SO BADLY where it goes! :D please, please, PLEASE! WRITE MORE OF THIS STORY!
| ochalke5 chapter 1 . 8/1/2009
It's an interesting story. I can't wait to see where it goes.
| Princess Briar Rose chapter 1 . 8/1/2009
and again, raven does it again... i'm addicted already
thankyou :) I can't wait to see what happens and how things progress :)