Reviews for The Story
hajimebassaidai chapter 1 . 3/7/2010
A great story with the narrator cutting into it, reminding the reader of the darkness and fear that is in the background from childhood, of all the things in her life that Vala had to fear. Yet she gains a home and a new family, who come to save her and Sam, while she tries to save Sam. At the end it is her family that provide that last moment of comfort, to die in the arms of the man she loves, even though she can't and doesn't. The last line is the most poignant of all. A tender, well-written and heart-wrenching fic.
macisgate chapter 1 . 8/11/2009
That was just amazing! So beautifully written. The ending was incredible. Awesome stuff.
MKRG chapter 1 . 8/7/2009
This was a wonderful look at Vala's life. Great background-builder and especially sad at the end. Cameron's action was touching. Love it. Favoriting it.
HAZMOT chapter 1 . 8/2/2009
Nicely done about Vala's past. It was like a montogue of time passage and how her life was tattered in the beginning. The remenants of the Gaould taking over her body and life was rudement of her wanting to survive at all cost. But the final ending of her life and friends, speaks volumes of what she had become and sad ending of the song, Only the Good Die Young. :D
brevisfics chapter 1 . 8/1/2009
Wow, sad, but absolutely beautiful!
spacegypsy1 chapter 1 . 8/1/2009
Absolutely heartbreaking, and beautiful. Now I'm all sad and depressed, but it was really well done. I have no words to offer up as a title... b
acer-sigma chapter 1 . 8/1/2009
Good story. Rather a sad look at Vala's life though. At least she met her end fighting, and with who she thought was Daniel.

As for a title well, how about 'The tragic life of Vala Mal Doran,' or something to that effect.
1477166 chapter 1 . 8/1/2009
Ngaww! DUDE. You really like killing Vala, don'tcha? Haha. *sniffle* That was sad. And I love how Cam lied to make Vala happy! That was so sweet!

*sigh* Super emotional fic, yeah? but I kinda loved it anyway!