|Reviews for Time Nor Tide|
| alix33 chapter 6 . 6/1/2011
"The SOO didn't respond well to finding the body of it's leader in his office." - "body of its leader".
| alix33 chapter 2 . 6/1/2011
"I own a punchbag, boxing gloves, a candle and an iPod. Interesting combination for dealing with powercuts." - Ideally you need a solar panel and a storage device for the solar energy it generates, so you can recharge the iPod's batteries when needed, too, or do the docking stations for iPods not use rechargable batteries? (I do not have one, so I do not know).
"Duck-man took me to a ballet – a guy jumped up and landed in splits. It looked sore. I tried it. I failed. It was sore. Jimmy got a girlfriend but she freaked out and left when she worked out what pathologist meant. He doesn't seem too cut up about it." - Hehehe.
| alix33 chapter 1 . 6/1/2011
"Tony grinned at her. "I'm not sure I want you off learning more ninja skills." "There are no more for me to learn, Tony," she replied, raising her eyebrows. His eyes widened in mock horror. "I'm glad you didn't tell me that before." - Hehehe.
| Daughters of Night chapter 7 . 11/28/2009
*cries her eyes out* o_O
| Ab55556 chapter 7 . 11/18/2009
HAYLEY I AM GOING TO THROTTLE YOU!
YOU FREAKIN' MADE ME CRY!
HOW DARE YOU?
Oh, and thanks for the dedication.
Anyway, back to the chapter.: HOW DARE YOU? Wait, I've already said that. Never mind, it makes it twice as effective. i'm hoping you feel the anger vibes coming through this poor, innocent keyboard here. Feel sympathy. For me. And the keyboard.
Ok, Alice, breathe.
I like Isaac.
The bit that really set me off was when she opened her email inbox, I didn't realise that they were all five years old :'(
The chapter title promised drama, which i got my fill of (just about :P), but it didn't promise this much heartbreaking emotion. Oh poor Ziva, she must feel so alone!
This is so sad!
How can you even bear writing this?
And, yes, on that cliffhanger, I have a message:
GET UDING NOW!
| skycloud86 chapter 7 . 11/17/2009
A dramatic and bittersweet ending to the fic. Great as always.
| Tiva4evaxxx chapter 7 . 11/17/2009
I cried. :'( :'( :'(
I, ah, that was freaking amazing! And omg, the whole Leila thing, and the whole Isaac thing, and omg, the email thing. That was what really got me. All the ones from Abby and how the latest was from Gibbs, and Tony's 'haven't heard from you in a while' and McGee's... and just. Omg. It's so sad. It's horrible. I hate you. Why do i put myself through this? Why do i read it? Because it's amazing. But is it really worth it? The pain i know i will go through when you post the sequel to time flies? WHY oh WHY do i do this? Humph. You know, you really should be flattered that i love you this much. You're such a good writer, which is also very unfair. I can't believe it's over. Can you believe it's over? I mean, i know you've had like, a trillion blocks on this, but still. It's over. And we've got the sequel to go thank god. But it's over. I don't like it! *whines* I think i'm in denial again... Imagine how bad i'll be when i finish ROL... In fact i don't even want to THINK about it! But... oh that was so amazing! And i love this fic, and and... yeah. I love you and... this fic... and this series... and everything. Oh and i loved the bit at the beginning, and when she says 'worse' about the NCIS and that bit. And thanks for the dedication, and i can't believe you made me cry... again. More years passed. 'Time doesn’t heal, Ziva knew better than anyone.' that bit was like :'( And you have Ziva so in character, and i love that paragraph and all your fics are just generally awesome and i'm rambling majorly but i'm not sure i care... Oh and the scary long paragraph in the middle was amazing, i liked the bit about the hair, i don't even know why... it was just... yeah. I really liked that bit. I loved the little Ziva/Isaac moment in the hospital it was like 'aww' and gah... i can't believe it's over but i love you and i love this fic!
You're an amazingly talented writer. And life is unfair.
But yeah, that was fantastic and this is a realy long review, but i decided you deserved it for being so amazing D
Hope you have a good day,
| YouGottaSingAlong chapter 7 . 11/16/2009
It was good.
Now come on, type it and punch they air with me;
| Daughters of Night chapter 6 . 10/31/2009
It was too short.
But that's okay.
| Ab55556 chapter 6 . 10/26/2009
Seriously Hay, I loved this.
I don't like the first bit though, Ziva? Shot? :O
Well, actually, to be completely fair, its an amazingly written section, but the outcome is not to my taste :P
We can't all be sweet and fluffy like Em though, in fact, I always look forward to your fics, partly because they are a sudden and extremely enjoyable contrast to Em's sickly sweet (although amazing) chapters.
Anyway, I liked Leila.
The ending was, as always, brilliant and very effective!
I expect a UD by the time I get back!
Great chapter, living up to my sky-high expectations of this fic! Its going so well!
| loudthoughts chapter 6 . 10/24/2009
I received an update about this story, and I'm so glad I read it. I love this story, even though it makes me a little sad to read ziva has been gone so long :(
Your writing is superb and I'm looking forward to your update.
(Hope it is soon! :] )
| YouGottaSingAlong chapter 6 . 10/24/2009
You suck at bashing eyelashes. Anyhoo, it wasn't bad.
Only two chapetrs to go
| InsanityGoneMad chapter 6 . 10/24/2009
As always that was a brilliant chapter! UD soon.
| skycloud86 chapter 6 . 10/24/2009
Great chapter as always. I thought the betrayal part was well written, and a very Ziva-esque way of getting herself out of danger. I think you write NCIS characters very well.
| Tiva4evaxxx chapter 6 . 10/24/2009
I thought you'd shot ziva and freaked out in like a huge way... and then, yet again i realized that this was a prequel :P
Brilliant, i love Leila, and i loved the the ending and actually i pretty much loved all of it :P
How do you write such long paragraphs. It's so unfair :P
Brilliant. But UD SOON! :D