|Reviews for A New Legend|
| Guest chapter 17 . 6/9/2016
"MEN ARE STRONGER THAN WOMEN," HUH?! OH HEEEEEELLLLLL NAAAWWWW
You know, I was really enjoying this hitsukarin fanfic, but noooooo you just had to ruin it...disappointing...
Well, I'm exaggerating somewhat, but you'd better not pull any more of that sexist, misogynistic shit again, or else I will personally fall out the sky and beat your ass 5 ways to sunday. Just a pleasant warning.
Men are NOT stronger than women.
| Guest chapter 2 . 6/9/2016
I like the plot, but your spelling is atrocious!
| Guest chapter 14 . 8/27/2015
Maybe i should just ask ichigo, no probably karin to finish u for typing thing like that
| hana chapter 21 . 11/25/2014
I really wish you would have added more details of there tosh and karin like there wedding, then the child. It is a huge fall back between the character because they really should not be married, there is nothing there was emanttment enough for it. More like too old friends .. So I say this was a big let down
| Ell chapter 1 . 1/3/2013
Just gotta say: this is an interesting idea, but I think your execution needs work. There are a few really awkward or grammatically incorrect sentences that aren't that hard to fix. The characterization is a little off, and I just don't think it's at all believable for Karin to have only just gotten her zanpakuto and all of a sudden have shikai and such amazing power just like that. Also, it looks like Karin's shikai command is almost exactly the same as Ryujin Jakka's (Head Captain Yamamoto's zanpakuto), which is "Reduce all creation to ash" (depending on the translator).
I think the overall idea of this is a really cool one, but I recommend you find yourself a good beta to help you work out the kinks and keep everything as true to canon as possible.
I hope this doesn't offend you, I just wanted to give you some constructive feedback.
| NTK13 chapter 21 . 5/29/2012
This was sooo amazing!
| Wynter.Wyllow chapter 9 . 1/1/2012
Great chapter except that after the one year later mark you still called Karin a 12 year old girl when she should have aged at least a year.
| SuppaOtaku chapter 1 . 12/20/2011
Not bad, very good actually. But you have to work on your spelling, judging from the first chapter you have great potential.
So, try to edit Ch1 with the spelling errors.
| Flickles chapter 1 . 8/24/2011
I gotta say, I'm really impressed with this story. Because this is the exact story I was looking for! I was really happy that I got to read this one. Though I know I only found this story like 5 days ago, I'm in love with this one. It's just like the story I imagined in my head. I love how the story is in someone's perspective! I think I might model my own story with yours, if you say that I can. but if I 'll do, I'll be sure to give claim to you and thanks :D because you really inspired/are inspiring me to write a story of my own. I also love how it's a HitsuKarin story. who cares about what HitsuMori or someone else say about how "your story is really bad" or something. To readers like me, I feel like this is the best story one can enjoy. on the . :D thank you thank you thank you for making this story :D :D :D :D :D :D
MANY THANKS FROM FLICKLES! HAHA
btw. I didn't make an account yet. I should and post stories :D
| FrostedStorm98 chapter 21 . 7/22/2011
Lol nice x}
| S and L chapter 7 . 6/27/2011
I really like this story and it's quite funny but the way you wrote it made it a bit hard to understand. Other than that good job :)
| Yunie1827 chapter 7 . 5/9/2011
i love this fic...it's nice to see that Momo is helping Matsumoto to pair up toshiro with karin. cause most of the fics i read... Momo is the antagonist but now Momo's helping them...it's really nice :D
| sayain673 chapter 10 . 12/23/2010
This looks like a fun ride!
| HandsomeAngel chapter 21 . 10/12/2010
O la la~ *eyes twinkle mischievously*
I just love your story! This is probably the third time I'm reading it, I think.
| KyuubiShinigami-chan chapter 21 . 9/2/2010
I loved the story ) nice ending :) good luck with finishing your other story, seems challenging :)