|Reviews for Not Alone Anymore|
| MidnightHalcyon chapter 1 . 9/20/2011
| Hawkslayer chapter 1 . 6/30/2011
I enjoyed this story as it is generally well written and the characterisation is excellent. The only thing I disliked is your constant use of 'thru'- a terrible misspelling of 'through'. While one such misspelling is acceptable, several are not and require the use of a spell checker. This seems to be a rather odd anomaly, however, as otherwise your spelling is good. Well done on the story, I do love Eliot whump. :)
| medicgirl chapter 1 . 10/31/2010
Excellent story. I love Eliot torture-fics, and this one was particularly creative. Well done :)
| Barbara P chapter 1 . 5/27/2010
Your first story? That seems hard to believe! I love hurt/comfort stories and this one was outstanding! I must admit I dislike the slash "pairing" hurt/comfort - I firmly believe all the team members are het and I don't care for the romantic nonsense in those types of stories, good or bad. I much prefer this kind where we see the team's respect and genuine affection for each other growing. Eliot may growl and grumble but deep down I think he's a marshmellow when it comes to his teammates and I think you really captured that aspect of his personality. I look forward to reading more of your stories!
| divine one chapter 1 . 8/24/2009
well written... raw...
gotta love eliot yeah!
| Touch of the Wind chapter 1 . 8/10/2009
Such a sad and emotional oneshot...I love the focus on Elliot and Sophie! So powerful!
| whimseyrhodes chapter 1 . 8/5/2009
Loved it, absolutely LOVED it! *adding to favorites*
It's totally believable that Eliot would sacrifice himself for Sophie, because he sees her as a lady, but not in a weak way. It's just his southern gentlemanly ways. And how wrong is it for me to love the torture scenes? Sick, I tell ya, sick. (but wonderful!) And the comfort at the end...aw.
Great job! .
| ASiriuslyGleekyTimeLord chapter 1 . 8/1/2009
That was really well written. I don't know why but for some reason, I am taking to Eliot torture stories...kind of morbid, but they're all really well written! Great job!
| Goody chapter 1 . 8/1/2009
This was great. Very intense and I loved the double torture, and Eliot being a protector even as he was being tortured as well.
The team looking after him was very touching, and your amount of detail and action had a really good balance. Really great for a first published story, thoroughly enjoyable.
One thing though, PWP is generally accepted as standing for Porn Without Plot, and as this story has a plot, and is not porn you might want to take that out of your summary, just thought I'd let you know.
Really enjoyed though. Goody.