|Reviews for The Boy Who Died|
| BeRe389 chapter 1 . 1/28
Yesterday I also wanted to congratulate you for the way you apply adjectives (but my father cut off the internet), at the beginning you weren't very good with this but after chapter 10 your adjetivization (I'm not sure if that word exist in English, but in Spanish it is "adjetivización") became more and more exquisite.
My brother commented that you became a good writer, I still think you can improve a lot more.
I really hope and wish from the bottom of my heart you would end this story, at least with a summary (if you do won't narrate anything anymore) in which you would summarize your ideas of the ending.
Again, your idea and story is beautiful.
| BeRe389 chapter 20 . 1/27
Your story was awesome, AWESOME, AWESOME! Few times I do recognize or appreciate the written work of a fan (a fanfiction), but yours was awesome.
At the beginning you lacked character's characterization, but as the chapters passed the characters became defined. I noticed few rhetoric figures, there are scenes that you would have been able to improve if you had used them more. You did considered a lot of aspects from the HP books and adapted so well to your situation of the Lestranges having a son, Rodolphus being killed, and Bellatrix madness over her deceased husband and son; I really liked your idea and how you developed it. You managed to have me preferring to read a fanfic instead of study; I must congratulate you for that (that's simply not common, less nowadays that I'm at university).
You lack some writing skills at the beginning, and you still aren't a good writer so far (chapter 20), thought you noticeably improved, still your story is so amazing that I bet not many people does even notice that (less if they don't read good and classic literature apart from commercial literature).
I loved your story, I'm really looking forward for you to continue writing this story, I really want to know the ending of this story (even if you want to kill every character, for I'm really intrigued) as many other people might have already comment.
Your story is fascinating, bewitching, you should finish it.
| Yusuke Urameshi - Mazoku chapter 20 . 1/12
| LBII chapter 19 . 11/13/2013
Great Story! I will follow this just in case you decide to finish it. I truly hope you do. Thank you for your time and talent so far.
| Awesomefox chapter 20 . 10/16/2013
Omg this i (: one of the best stories ever !
| Guest chapter 20 . 10/15/2013
Nice to see Harry hasn't done a whole 180 turn in personality like some other fics. Hope he stays dark
Poor Bella! That was insensitive of Dumbles to shout out his secrets like that
| Guest chapter 19 . 9/10/2013
Mate, I was so pissed when my precious Bellatrix died. I loved that character to bits! It was really frustrating, her death I mean. It's an awesome story, see you soon.
| 1258brun chapter 19 . 9/9/2013
Throughout the whole of that last bit I was screaming "JUST FUCKING DISAPPARATE!" at my laptop.
| newmoon26 chapter 20 . 9/2/2013
This is an awesome story! I hope it'll be updated soon.
| katcamree chapter 20 . 8/25/2013
OH MY GOSH THAT WAS AMAZING! I CANT BELLIEVE THAT'S THE END?!
They storyline was so unique I'd never read one like that! Bellatrix raising Harry as her own.. Wow.
| Potter Head chapter 18 . 8/24/2013
Damn you! Why did you kill Bellatrix?!
| Slytherin Studios chapter 20 . 8/23/2013
I like your story, please udpate soon.
| Gigimagic chapter 20 . 7/17/2013
Do you plan on continuing? It is well written, paced and is grammatically nearly flawless. I quite enjoy it. Hope you update soon :P
| cellester chapter 20 . 7/12/2013
is this story dead? loved it so far hope you continue.
| fan-de-carlisle-cullen chapter 20 . 7/8/2013
And the end! Or is there more we don't know about? Please update the story. ;)