Harry's in trouble!

Quite an impressive chapter length this time. I whole heartedly disagree with sending Harry and Draco to the Potters for summer. I do not feel that was well thought out or logical. It seems so wrong and I can't believe you felt Dumbledore would approve of sending the son of the woman who murdered the Potter's own kid to their house. I would have thought that Voldemort would have made contact with the boys to discuss the summer plans. That would be logical to me. I hope they don't stay there long because, to me, that's a bad story idea.

I didn't like the slamming of the brakes and car flipping. I felt that was an overreaction to simply hearing a name of a dead person, no matter how close they were. It surprises me that Jason's parents kept the fact that he had an older brother from him all these years.

I'm interested to see if Harry and Hermione will ever have some nice moments together. Other than those two points above, I enjoy reading this and am very interested to see Harry's transition to being a good guy when he eventually finds out. I kinda hope you plan ahead and don't just approach the story telling by the seat of your pants. I think that this has some pretty critical moments in its future that can either be well done and awesome or suck so much that ppl stop reading. Anyway, thanks for updating and good luck!

Can't wait for your next chapter. Will the Potters finally find Harry?

'Unfortunately, Draco spotted this and shouted gleefully, "Graceful, Henry! You should join gymnastics!"

Harry fingered him.'

If you're going to write scenes like that, shouldn't you have a slash warning in the summary?

Or maybe just use a less suggestive phrase than "fingered him?" :O

Yay for long chapter :P I like the title...I can't believe Hermoine pulled through the plan. I would've thought she had a plan to trick them...

does harry turn good or gives everyone the finger and sticks with his mum?

too soon for the reveal I think. but.. we don't know if ghosts show on the map or not

Oh boy, this is gonna lead to a big train wreck in the near future it seems, and will look forward to if we'll see Moody's obit next time. Sad that Hannah's mother got kileed, and will have to wonder, even if they do find out that Henry is Harry, what difference that might be in the long run, or if Harry will not make it any easier, or if he'll end up playing them if he can?

Oh hey! It's all happening now!

Awk poor Bella's gonna go mental when she realises ahe can't see Harry. Also, I love how Harry feels so protective of Rodolphous.

Great story. You should be proud of yourself.

I was loving the story until they had to stay at hogwarts then the story was just okay but when henry was sorted into gryfindor you pretty much just went completely mainstream

nice

"more than a little shocked at how quickly his mother had just left him for Voldemort."

Dont be a prat, what u want ? For her to be crucio'ed ?

Ah updates, there so nice and fluffy, love the 2 latest updates. Wonder what Draco's problem is? I really hope when Harry finds out wat Bella did al those years ago that he remains with her, she did raise her son with a lot of love all those years, the Christmas dinner scene gave me a heart ache, you seem to have put a lot of emtion in that one or it could be just me. Keep up the most excellent work.

rotfl... poor harry. *O*

I ARE EXCITED. .-. well i just hope that he doesn't have to betray the dark lord .. bahhh i remembered an incident about punishments. it's nice for random people to let you off the hook like that . havent read the chapter yet but i will finish everything today nyahhaa