Reviews for The Boy Who Died
Beezlebubbles chapter 6 . 10/20/2009
My though was exactly like Voldemort. I was like "Why would Bella punish Henry, he did what was necessary to win, and that for a slytherin is anything they can, whatever the means." If he had killed Draco than it would be different. P

Ohh Bella will loose her position of the right hand of Voldemort. Henry, the most trusted and cruel. MWHAAHHAA NO HOPE FOR THE LIGHTIES! XD

Next chappie, "Interesting stuff to learn, The true magic." by Lord Voldemort.

Cheers
Andronamar chapter 6 . 10/18/2009
This is a great story. I have not enjoyed reading something in a long time on fanfiction. I love your Dark Harry I also like the way everyone is portrayed it is great work. Thanks Andronamar.
serendipity56 chapter 6 . 10/14/2009
luff it. now update
pav chapter 6 . 10/14/2009
Exceptionally well written darkfic so far.

You have kept the the universe and atmosphere of canon story reads as if JKR herself would have worked at it.

There is no unnecessary upgrading - no hidden castles,unknown branches of magic,thosands of DE - in short nothing that takes away the beauty of original plot.

And you have avoided the main error of darkfic writers - treatment of violence as some act of sacrilege against the rules of christian Harry - Henry this kind of life is doind what comes good or evil just world according to Darwin.

I really hope to see this story completed.

My respect and admiration.
ArcaneMaverick chapter 6 . 10/13/2009
Hot Damn! I'm excited for Voldemort to teach Harry too! Honestly, I just about skip every part that's not Harry, Draco and the Death Eaters. Sorry, but they're not nearly as interesting. But I can't wait for the interactions between them and Harry.
Lord Hadrian Black chapter 6 . 10/13/2009
i love this chapter!

i love this story!

its really well written, and has many possibilities.

i myself personally would rather Henry stay on the dark side..

but you are the writer and i will continue to read it no matter how it turns out! :)
DiagonAlleyParis chapter 6 . 10/13/2009
Very good chapter, I like the interactions between Draco and Henry. Henry seems already be a dark wizard. I can imagine the lessons with Professor Voldemort will darker him a little more...

I can wait for your next update.

Keep up your great job.
DiagonAlleyParis chapter 5 . 10/13/2009
This was tense. Sirius is right, Henry is Harry but now he is Henry Lestrange but he thins and acts like a true Lestrange.

I wonder if Voldemort will find out that Snape is a spy and he let in the Order in his home.

Very good chapter, I like your writing.
Nios chapter 6 . 10/13/2009
I'm not sure about Bellatrix's characterization in this story. At the start, I thought it was pretty good to have her distraught and crazy to justify her taking of Harry to be her son. But now with her being so coherent now (enough to reprimand Harry about hexing a cousin even), I have to wonder if she still held that belief and if she would regret adopting a half-blood.
Nios chapter 5 . 10/13/2009
Voldemort is really getting careless after being in power for so long huh? You would think he wouldn't expose his subordinates before an enemy so easily, captured or not.
Nios chapter 4 . 10/13/2009
I didn't think phoenix core would be that big of a deal. After all, even Draco had unicorn hair for his wand's core in canon and that was an animal known for purity and light too. Powerful core is powerful core. I don't think any Death Eater would complain about it.
Nios chapter 3 . 10/13/2009
What happened to the magical list that somehow knows the name and location of all the children who will attend Hogwarts? Even those who had changed names? Or is that fanon? Haha, it's a little hard to differentiate between canon and fanon after reading too many fanfics.
Nios chapter 2 . 10/13/2009
Can't Voldemort pick up on Bellatrix's thoughts with his legilimency? Or maybe he trusted her enough not to use it? Anyway, it just seems odd for Voldemort to notice something off about Bellatrix but let it go so easily given his suspicious nature.

Also... Wouldn't they verify the body with blood check? I suppose you can explain it away by assuming those wizards frown upon such "muggle" methods. Still, with Lily being a muggle-born one would think a distraught mother would refuse to admit her son is dead until she had checked everything.

On that note, I rather liked how you explained Bellatrix motivation. I'm glad you didn't go for the usual pity route for these type of stories. I can't picture Bellatrix hesitating from killing a baby; it would be just too OOC. Here the madness excuse worked rather well. If one has to nitpick though, you could have emphasized her madness more. Her thoughts still seemed coherent enough when she was declaring "You are Henry Lestrange and I am your mother". It almost made her seem like she knew (albeit subconsciously), that Harry was not Henry. If she had truly believed Harry will simply be her son's new body, she should have said something more along the line of "let's go home now" etc.
Nios chapter 1 . 10/13/2009
Rodolphus is dead already?
Anon chapter 1 . 10/13/2009
Interesting idea...
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