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I LOVE this story so far so I'm fav'ing & alert'ing it as soon as I finish the review!

I officially offer my services.. if you ever need help with a chapter? Or ideas? Or opinions? Anything at all. Seriously, I love helping good writers with small things. It makes me feel special.

:)

Okays, so I was wondering if Henry (officially calling him Henry instead of Harry) is going to love Bella like a mother or remember Lily as his mother?

MY OPINION: I think I'd like this story a lot more if he ends up loving Bella as his mother, and forgetting Lily. Keep in mind if your going for believable-ness, he's like 15 months old and nobody remembers that time of their lives, so he'd forget Lily eventually.

Also I was thinking if you'd thought at all if Bella was going to re-marry? If Henry is going to be a student at Hogwarts/another school/or homeschooled? Are James and Lily going to have more children?

Yes, these two chapters inspired that many questions, LOL.

So.. (once again) I love this story so far. I cant wait to see what happens. And no pressure, but update asap? yush?

Great ch up date soon!

This could be interesting... Keep writing!

Beautyful! They are all so good in character, especially Bella!

Thought about Diana... why did she not escape with her husband when she knew, that Voldy was coming? Or was she already dead and Voldy only got her husband at home?

Great beginning!

For further writing, you may be interested in this site:

w w w . geocities sapienti_university_of_magic (without the spaces)

It's a role playing site based on the Harry Potter world.

Either way, good luck with your writing and I look forward to reading more.

Melora Brockert, SUM student

I love Dark Harry stories and this idea is so original update soon.

Your summary seems to indiccate you going to have Bella do some blood ritual to make Harry really her son. Is Neville going to be the 'boy who lived'? If not, then I would assume Voldemort lives and rules. That doesn't make for much of a Harry story.

Ooh, this looks very very interesting...aside from the fact that you're killing Neville, who I love, and a slight overuse of the word "lazily", this should turn out pretty spectacular.

Good start,The theme is going! :D

woow. very bella-like. (:

WOW, im loving this story already! i loved the ending of the chapter, it shows bella's craziness perfectly. update soon!

Great ch! up date soon!

I actually feel sorry for Bella. I look forward to her adopting, Harry, though.