|Reviews for A Midsummer Night's Dream|
| Guest chapter 12 . 5/15/2013
Persona 4 reference! :D
| zebediahp chapter 4 . 4/17/2013
Story seems childish already. In truth despite the unrealistic storyline which didn't really bother me, I just can't stand reading a fic that has unnecessary bashing of key characters for no apparent reason apart from some childish dislike of the character from the anime/manga. Sakura being called 'Suckura' was where I read to and I don't see the point to read further as so far you've just been making stupid background stories and names for character which you don't like (which seems to be the majority of Konoha's shinobi). Not only that but there is no reason behind it mainly, just to inform you, if a kid dresses in a horrible orange outfit (and is unbelievably loud and stupid) and is trying to be a shinobi, he is going to be made fun of and deserves it and he also probably deserves to get hit by his teammates/classmates who have to put up with him. There are so many problems with this fic, I won't list them, you probably know them, but don't think of them as issues. To shorten it, making Naruto impossibly powerful at age 11/12, a leader of Konoha's Akatsuki unit, whilst keeping him immature enough to make childish comments about Kakashi, Sakura, Jiraiya, etc. seems completely stupid. There I'm done, good luck with the story in any case. Nice choice of pairing as well :D .
| The Masked Idiot chapter 18 . 3/25/2013
Before it was announced in bold for the actual finals pairings, you accidentally wrote Shirosuna instead of Shirotsuchi. I just thought I'd point that out.
| Warrior of Sangre chapter 15 . 10/28/2012
I was not expecting that!
| traviswj chapter 18 . 10/8/2012
This is an excellent story, and I hope you update it soon :)
| monster420 chapter 18 . 10/2/2012
The story is really interesting. The fact that the autor has portrayed Konoha as a militaristic society in a world full of lies and deceit that cares only about results and not the means is a definite plus. This sketch of Konoha has only been achieved in a few fics like Geor-sama's "Naruto : Altered History" and Adrien Skywalker's "Kurie" and "The Nidaime's Heir". The level of insight that the author has displayed regarding the working of Narutoverse is very detailed and helpful.
The manner in which the author has developed the various characters is very refreshing. He has skillfully showed that the ninja world is not all black and white as seen in traditional fics but that a lot of it is painted in the depressing shades of grey. The sneak peak that the author provides in the minds of spies, politicians and the different pawns that keeps the cogs of the machine known as war in constant motion is really interesting.
The thing that really intrigues me the thought process of characters like Yahiko, Nagato, Naruto, Hiruzen and Sasuke. The way in which they perceive the world is so realistic.
The only negative point regarding this fic is that the author left it unfinished and kept the readers hanging.
| WalkingStranger99 chapter 2 . 8/14/2012
i do not really read allot of sandaime bashed so i thought i would try it
| jeanpaulreddy93 chapter 18 . 8/3/2012
I like this story! It is nicely written... Wish that you created the fic with Naruto having the Sharingan and being more like Tobi instead of the orange wearing idot mask though. And his personality being a bit like Madara and Aizen combined... Kyoka Suigetsu! Meaning his calm, collected, insanely intelligent, ruthless and damn strong.
| phantom130 5 chapter 11 . 7/10/2012
We finally get to know more about Danzo :)
| phantom130 5 chapter 10 . 7/10/2012
I like the Sarutobi POV in this chapter. I agree with you with the fact that it makes him seem a little less like a jerk. Myself, I'm still really trying to find good in the man, because I liked him at the start of the actual Naruto series for sort of helping to bring the Leaf closer together, but I'm still sort of upset with him for taking such drastic measures with the Uchiha clan. Thankfully his actions in your story don't seem as crazy. (Especially since he let some Uchiha live)
| phantom130 5 chapter 9 . 7/10/2012
Interesting. I really like where this is going. You mentioned making Naruto strong enough to take out Kuranai, but would you say he'd be able to beat Kakashi while he still had his sharingan?
| phantom130 5 chapter 8 . 7/10/2012
I like what you did with showing the different POVs. That's really helpful with understanding the world more. Also I really like your portrayal of Kabuto. I like the idea of him having to pose loyal to Konoha and Orochimaru while really being loyal to Orochimaru. It would be neat if he were secretly planning to overthrow the Akatsuki as well. I'm not sure why, but I could see that happening.
| phantom130 5 chapter 7 . 7/10/2012
I really liked the fight scene with Kakashi. At first I was surprised how closely the Akatsuki's tactics were going as planned, but the bit with Kakashi's sharigan caught me off guard. I really wasn't expecting that! That was amazing!
| phantom130 5 chapter 6 . 7/10/2012
Good job going through most of the Land of Waves arc. I really like your bloodline idea.
| phantom130 5 chapter 5 . 7/10/2012
Great chapter. I forgot to mention before, but I really like how much wit goes into this story. I also agree with you when you mentioned not to change a major event without changing a bunch of smaller stuff that goes along with it. Your story is really well thought out. :)