that was great loved it can't wait to read what happens next

I really love this story and I can't wait for more! Please continue!

Hey, I really really love this story. Please continue it! :D Thanks!

So cool, now what happens :D

I've just really got into numbers too and must say Don was the character I first fell in love with. I love this fanfiction! The mere idea of Don being a father makes me grin! I can't wait to read more :)

Update soon, please!

So what exactly happened with Charlie's car getting blown up? Or will that be revealed in chapters to come? You Should have Don and Alex do some bonding..

What a way to be introduced to your family? You get blown up. lol

Some grammer but I love teh conept so keep it up it will get better. There are a few betas out there that I am sure would be happy to help. Ask them it will make teh story 10times better. But anyways keep up the great work.

I don't know if you read fanfiction very often, but when I saw the summary I couldn't help but think this story has been done so many times; Don finding out he is the father of a teenage girl.

I must admit, though, I enjoyed Alex and her pov. It was a different take on the familiar theme and the entire "first meeting" scene came across very believable. I also liked Don tending to her injury. Very touching.

I hope you have most of the story done and update regularly. I'll be watching for it.

I like this hope you keep it going.