Reviews for Forget and Forgive
Fanf1cFan chapter 1 . 8/2/2009
Until I read the A/N at the end, I was going to mention that this was really similar to another unfinished fic I've read. The other one kept my interest and lack of updates was a disappointment. This one is OK, too. The Haruka-Seta by-play was good, and in-line with what I remember of the original. You probably have your reasons, but the Haruka-Keitaro exchange at the end was maybe a little more emotionally charged than I would have expected. I don't see Haruka as always being completely unflappable, but this part of your Haruka seems a little outside her usual range.

Good basic nuts and bolts. Not that I was searching for mistakes, but I didn't notice any.

Please continue (and finish)this.
Alaster Raz chapter 1 . 8/2/2009
This is the first Love Hina story I have read that seems real.

I mean the conversations seem more relate-able. I'm glad the

drama was toned down and the Haruka/Seta conversation(s) was

excellent as well. This was an enjoyable so far.

I look forward to reading the incoming chapters.
Starfire99 chapter 1 . 8/1/2009
I don't think I've seen a Love Hina amnesia fic where he's only had his memory regress to a certain point. I think the only one's I've read have been total amnesia.

I look forward to seeing how this turns out.
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