Reviews for Illegal Contact
Guest chapter 1 . 11/9
Why does Edward get excited about Bella giving him her number? The girl literally called his phone a few chapters earlier to ask about football for Seth?
Guest chapter 16 . 9/9
Please update
Jillgrab chapter 16 . 1/22
This can’t be it! Please tell me there’s more!
Lulu chapter 16 . 12/24/2022
Is this story finished? Thank You for your work.
4Ever-Twilight-Luva chapter 16 . 12/13/2021
Please tell me there more!
Guest chapter 16 . 3/2/2021
You leave this ?
Pynky chapter 16 . 12/22/2020
This story was so good, I wish there was more!
was-sticks chapter 7 . 7/3/2020
“Seth and Jacob were too busy making out” oh tea?
Guest chapter 2 . 10/28/2019
This annoys the shit outa me. “My brother was caught in a cupboard with a slutty girl” So what does that make her brother? Blameless? Innocent? Pure?
Edward says Lauren ‘dresses like a whore’ and talks about Skanky women too.
Why is it always the girls fault? Why is she judged but not the guy? Smacks of double standards to me. As I say, annoying.
Other than that. Well written story.
KatHat4 chapter 1 . 8/30/2019
Hey, Jen733! Just to let you know I rec'd Illegal Contact today on the Fic Dive at A Different Forest as a 'golden oldie' ('s football time!) Loved your story!
rclaurel chapter 16 . 8/9/2019
will you be adding anymore
mysupermanwillcome chapter 16 . 7/12/2019
Any chance you would finish posting this? I love this story!
Lulutbo chapter 15 . 6/3/2019
Um...where is the rest of the story super sad to get to the last posted chapter and be left hanging. I’ve really enjoyed so far!
BellaTesoro chapter 16 . 5/28/2019
Wait, you reposted it just to leave the last chapters missing? I don't understand? Hey it's your work you get to do what you want. Thank you for sharing any part of your work with us, I just didn't know this was a repost and missing the ending. I did read this way back when but I did enjoy the reread.
BellaTesoro chapter 14 . 5/28/2019
Although I can't understand what Edward was thinking by leaving Bella at the dance the way he did...he just ran out on her like he was scared and didn't know how to handle being seen by the students, which didn't make sense. But I guess he was just overwhelmed. Edward certainly made up for it with the most romantic and sensual 'first' for them. Nice.
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