|Reviews for Illegal Contact|
| was-sticks chapter 7 . 7/3
“Seth and Jacob were too busy making out” oh tea?
| Guest chapter 2 . 10/28/2019
This annoys the shit outa me. “My brother was caught in a cupboard with a slutty girl” So what does that make her brother? Blameless? Innocent? Pure?
Edward says Lauren ‘dresses like a whore’ and talks about Skanky women too.
Why is it always the girls fault? Why is she judged but not the guy? Smacks of double standards to me. As I say, annoying.
Other than that. Well written story.
| KatHat4 chapter 1 . 8/30/2019
Hey, Jen733! Just to let you know I rec'd Illegal Contact today on the Fic Dive at A Different Forest as a 'golden oldie' (because...it's football time!) Loved your story!
| rclaurel chapter 16 . 8/9/2019
will you be adding anymore
| mysupermanwillcome chapter 16 . 7/12/2019
Any chance you would finish posting this? I love this story!
| Lulutbo chapter 15 . 6/3/2019
Um...where is the rest of the story super sad to get to the last posted chapter and be left hanging. I’ve really enjoyed so far!
| BellaTesoro chapter 16 . 5/28/2019
Wait, you reposted it just to leave the last chapters missing? I don't understand? Hey it's your work you get to do what you want. Thank you for sharing any part of your work with us, I just didn't know this was a repost and missing the ending. I did read this way back when but I did enjoy the reread.
| BellaTesoro chapter 14 . 5/28/2019
Although I can't understand what Edward was thinking by leaving Bella at the dance the way he did...he just ran out on her like he was scared and didn't know how to handle being seen by the students, which didn't make sense. But I guess he was just overwhelmed. Edward certainly made up for it with the most romantic and sensual 'first' for them. Nice.
| BellaTesoro chapter 8 . 5/28/2019
I can't believe these two are still going with the slow burn and after being together every night watching scary movies and sharing meals together. Edward really wants to take things slow and prove himself to her. Since they were going to Portland anyway, why not go to a hospital or clinic there to be tested this way no one, especially Lauren who works at Fork's hospital would see them?
| BellaTesoro chapter 4 . 5/27/2019
Edward and Bella's first meeting went well. She knows he can change a tire and doesn't call someone else to do it for him. It was sweet of Bella to first make those cookies for Edward and then to walk over to his place to give him the wine, thank you card and cash to repay him for his help. When Bella opened the door for Edward she was yelling at Seth and yet once he was in the house Seth was no where to be found. Didn't Bella introduce Edward to her brother?
| BellaTesoro chapter 3 . 5/27/2019
Silly me. I have read this before. And yet I'm enjoying this reread. Thanks for keeping this here so we can enjoy this entertaining story!
| BellaTesoro chapter 1 . 5/27/2019
How can it be that I've never read this? Well here I am now. First chapter hooked me right happy you've kept this here after all these years.
| petmom1213 chapter 15 . 4/6/2019
Why don't you just repost the whole story at one time?
| petmom1213 chapter 16 . 4/5/2019
Is that all? I'm so disappointed. This has been such a good story. I really want to get an ending. Please.
| Krista Marie chapter 16 . 3/7/2019
I really enjoyed this story hope it gets updated