Reviews for Illegal Contact
one of eddie's girls chapter 2 . 8/12/2009
Good start... cant wait to find out more
katydid13 chapter 2 . 8/12/2009
Interesting story so far!
ClancyJane chapter 2 . 8/12/2009
oh i'm looking forward to *july* too : )

and the next chapter !

ugh.. he's 'dating' lauren ? oh yuk, lol
That One Angry Hobbit chapter 2 . 8/12/2009
drop kick Lauren!
motherduckatschool chapter 2 . 8/12/2009
ooh.

the meeting awaits.

Loved it.

keep writing,

Motherduckatschool
manda2784 chapter 2 . 8/11/2009
I love the way this story is starting! I really enjoy reading about Bella in a motherly type role. I think it's really sweet that Edward thinks Bella has a beautiful voice. I can't wait until she and Seth get back home to Forks. I'm looking forward to reading more!
tkeaton1 chapter 2 . 8/11/2009
liking the story so far and if the prologue is anything to go by it looks like it is going to get pretty spicy soon! :) Cant wait
elaine67 chapter 2 . 8/11/2009
m very interested in reading more
MasenCullen chapter 2 . 8/11/2009
First off I want to thank you for not putting you know who in this story... wait... she's not going to be in this story, right? I can deal w/ Lauren. Just saying'.

I LOL when Bella says she wanted to run down the hallway, as well when the final bell rang signaling school was out for the summer. ::snort:: ::shakes head:: It sounds like Seth could use a good male role model in his life right about now... and joining the football team back home w/ his buds... I'm assuming he's good friends w/ Jake and Paul, yes? Anywho... football is all about discipline and Coachward don't take any shit.

No Edward... Bella knows nothing about sports so she does not know who you are or were. That right there takes a load off. Or at least I think so. So excited for them to meet. I really want to see some Coachward action w/ the team and Bella. ::giggles::
Charmie77 chapter 2 . 8/11/2009
Okay - this has amazing promise!

Can't wait for more!
RogueSyrene chapter 2 . 8/11/2009
Good story so far I can't wait to read more I'm very interested.
rilery15 chapter 2 . 8/11/2009
i really like this story so far. I'm very excited for them to meet. Can't wait for the next chapter!
just me reading chapter 2 . 8/11/2009
Aw. Now just how to get rid of the Lauren character...I like the pace of the story.
BlueDiamondRing chapter 2 . 8/11/2009
Looking forward for this story to get rolling. Good luck with it.
kenziemorton97yahoo.com chapter 2 . 8/11/2009
i love this story! you rock.
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