Reviews for Illegal Contact |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Good start... cant wait to find out more |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting story so far! |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh i'm looking forward to *july* too : ) and the next chapter ! ugh.. he's 'dating' lauren ? oh yuk, lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() drop kick Lauren! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ooh. the meeting awaits. Loved it. keep writing, Motherduckatschool |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the way this story is starting! I really enjoy reading about Bella in a motherly type role. I think it's really sweet that Edward thinks Bella has a beautiful voice. I can't wait until she and Seth get back home to Forks. I'm looking forward to reading more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() liking the story so far and if the prologue is anything to go by it looks like it is going to get pretty spicy soon! :) Cant wait |
![]() ![]() ![]() m very interested in reading more |
![]() ![]() ![]() First off I want to thank you for not putting you know who in this story... wait... she's not going to be in this story, right? I can deal w/ Lauren. Just saying'. I LOL when Bella says she wanted to run down the hallway, as well when the final bell rang signaling school was out for the summer. ::snort:: ::shakes head:: It sounds like Seth could use a good male role model in his life right about now... and joining the football team back home w/ his buds... I'm assuming he's good friends w/ Jake and Paul, yes? Anywho... football is all about discipline and Coachward don't take any shit. No Edward... Bella knows nothing about sports so she does not know who you are or were. That right there takes a load off. Or at least I think so. So excited for them to meet. I really want to see some Coachward action w/ the team and Bella. ::giggles:: |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay - this has amazing promise! Can't wait for more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good story so far I can't wait to read more I'm very interested. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i really like this story so far. I'm very excited for them to meet. Can't wait for the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw. Now just how to get rid of the Lauren character...I like the pace of the story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Looking forward for this story to get rolling. Good luck with it. |
![]() ![]() i love this story! you rock. |