Reviews for Spin the Bottle, an Alphabet Weekends Outtake
Chellie09 chapter 1 . 8/2/2009
This was really cute! Oh those phrases, never thought I'd hear or see them again! Lol! Wow!

Spin the Bottle! I'm so glad I've never actually had to play that game, poor Bella! Edward's so sweet to her, always wanting to make her feel better, but at the same not make it so obvious!

I like how they scout out that ice cream, it's calling their names! Lol! And how Edward scoops his up and then hands it to Bella after telling her to get her own! Lol! Yep, perfect little gentleman in the making! :P

Sucks that he had to kiss another girl first, but that's the rules of the game. But it's sweet how he doesn't count that as his first, and instead considers it to be with Bella!

Love this outtake! Are there more coming? :P Can't wait for the next chapter! Is it tomorrow yet? :D
simfan42 chapter 1 . 8/2/2009
I got to read this last night but I didn't get to review until just now.


First kisses are so sweet.
Ironic Twist chapter 1 . 8/2/2009
Sweet - very sweet. Just like Swiss dark chocolate ice cream. Looking forward to the AW update.

Please consider putting the outtakes in one story that we can subscribe to.
wonderingseakinglearning chapter 1 . 8/2/2009
Oh this was just perfect.

‘Their secret best friend’s pact about always sticking together like “glue on Popsicle sticks”'

Ha ha, they were inseparable from the time they were, if I remember correctly, 4. I really don’t know how secret this pact was.
babylou23 chapter 1 . 8/2/2009
aww so cute, the image od edward with braces as a kid is great. he's always writtin as perfect so that makes him cuter. great out take
ladysharkey1 chapter 1 . 8/2/2009
So cute. I love how Edward counts Bella's kiss as his first kiss too. I love these characters. They are the best out there.

Hope you're vacation was great. It was a LONG 2 weeks for me )
latuacantante4him chapter 1 . 8/2/2009
This is so cute. I love this.
LacunarAmnesia chapter 1 . 8/2/2009
So cute! Can't wait for more of the story!
nermalasu chapter 1 . 8/2/2009
omg that was so cute! bella being all nervous about kissing, i don't blame her though. it's a good thing it was edward though, he was really sweet. and he slipped her the tongue! didn't see that coming! and i loved the slang, really brought me back! great outtake! thanks for sharing!
MarySoul chapter 1 . 8/2/2009
aw.. you even manage to made a perfect young and sweet little Edward!

Another wonderful memory to make them perfect together!
twi-ction chapter 1 . 8/2/2009

best. outtake. ever.

that was so sweet! You captured the youthful Edward and Bella really well I think. :)

PS: I love your story more than Ice Cream.
Groovechild1964 chapter 1 . 8/2/2009
How sweet. They truely belong together. Please update AW soon...I am dying to find out what happens next!
Holly1980 chapter 1 . 8/2/2009
Awe! That was so sweet and cute!

Thanks for sharing!

Frust-sheep chapter 1 . 8/2/2009
Great outtake again. :)
Llama Queen Katie chapter 1 . 8/2/2009
That was cute. I liked it!
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